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When i saw a new chapter in my notifications, i was like this
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This was worth the wait.
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Get your Elton John out of my ponies, that is too many feels at once!
But in all seriousness, this is an awesome story, can't wait to see more.
well i have some things in common with david the most comparable with my terrible singing voice
YES!!!! I WAITED FOREVER FOR A NEW CHAPTER!
THE FUN HAS BEEN DOUBLED!
Finally! They're back! Awesome job! Worth the wait!
THIS NEEDS MORE VIEWS AND MORE LIKES
this is a very touching story and not that much touching bonys around
Well you wern't joking when you said that you were almost done. And not a moment too soon!
It also seems that you have kept your promise when you said you would tone down the 'oh Luna, oh David's' .
We'll all be awaiting the next chapter eagerly, I'm sure. Keep at it!
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Glad you liked it! BTW the first pic made me lol! And thanks for the Twilight Sparkle Seal of Approval!
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Yeah, I know the Elton John song might not be everyone's favorite, but I wanted Luna to ask David to sing her one of the songs they listened to on Earth. I went over quite a few songs before I finally decided on this one. I was trying to find one that would fit the mood just right.
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You and me both. I can't sing very well either.
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Sorry for the delay but I'm glad you both enjoyed the new chapter! Hopefully it won't be a month till I add another chapter. And yes the fun has been Doubled!
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It'd really be nice if this story did get more views and likes. Thank you for the comment! And I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I've been trying to deliver a heartfelt tale. Though am I really one of the only touching bronies around? I'd have thought there would be others.
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Thank you for the comment and continued support! I'll do my best and hopefully it won't be a month till Chapter 9 is posted. If all goes well I should definitely have time to get a good start on it this weekend.
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No, I like the song and it was fitting, but it made me feel so hard. It worked very well for what you were doing.
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I'll be more than happy to do so, since I have awesome readers like you!
The Elton John song made this chapter so much better for me it was already fantastic! I just love Elton John XD
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Sweet! I wasn't sure if I made a good choice or not. I know some people aren't a fan of Elton John, but that is one of his best songs! I thought it fit the mood perfectly. Thanks for the comment!
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I hope you like it. Before "You Brighten My Day", it was my most popular fic. I think I lost some people after Chapter 7. A number of readers felt the romance was too much on the sweet side (and maybe in some spots it was). Sadly only a few of my loyalest fans commented on chapter 8. I do plan on writing more chapters, but the lack of time and the insane popularity of my Celestia fic has taken my focus off this one. And that's considering Luna is my favorite pony.
I have said this many times before, I know, but... THIS FIC IS AMAZING! I can't wait til chapter 9, even without my inspiration I'm sure it'd be perfect!
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I hope you like it! It's one of my more popular stories.
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I hope you still like it, once you read through to chapter 8!
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Chapter 9 is in the works. And I think this fic will ultimately leave my Celestia fic in the dust once, it gets a few more chapters advancing the main line of the story going!
You want a love song try "The story of my life" by Neil Diamond.
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Honestly, I'm amazed I didn't get more flack for using that Elton John song in Chapter 8. Though in truth, I did consider a series of songs, before deciding on that one. I chose it more for the lyrics rather than who originally performed it.
Nah, you did good there. And the lyrics to that song I mentioned earlier are awesome as well. The artist was just in case you wanted to YouTube it.
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Oh okay. Thank you for that! I'll be sure to check it out! This may sound odd, but I really enjoy a good love song. Especially if I can associate it with a pony!
1109581 I think it would be a good bet to say its rather heart rending. But yeah I listen to love songs too. Especially when I'm drinking. Good thing I'm only a part time alcholic.
I would simply like to say, I am enjoying this tale quite a bit! Just chain read all 8 chapters, and while yes a few parts were a tad too sappy for me... It's a love story! It's supposed to be a tad sappy! Sofar, the story has come together quite well and the background prophecy along with the sporadic bits with the 'bad guys' lends an... I don't know, an epic feel to the story.
Oh, and since Luna is quite simply the best...
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Thanks for sharing a wonderful story, can't wait to read more!
lololololololololol, i am haveing a lol attack. i was reading the part where he was singing and my phone thought it would be funny to play "Walk Away" by Five Finger Death Punch. he's taling about being their forever, and i'm listeing to a song about leaving while you still have the chance.
Oh I just realized you're the one who wrote You brighten my day. I was wondering why the plot reminded me of it. Coincidentally, your celestia fic was one of my first favorites. I do love both stories though.
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Thank you!
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I'm glad you enjoy them! BTW I should be posting chapter 4 of "You Brighten My Day" either tonight or tomorrow. And I do hope to get back to chapter 9 of this fic at some point.
....WOOHOO!!!!!!
Let me just say great choice of music. Looking forward to the next update!
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Thank you! The next chapter is in the works...along with a bunch of other fics. I have so many ideas for interesting fics...but I must get back to this one! cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-lfun.png
This fic is EPIC... Buuuuut the clop scene was really short in my opinion
This is amazing. Both this and your Celestia fic both have this warm, happy feel to them. Also I love your style of classic and chivalrous romance.
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy them both. The classic and chivalrous romance is my favorite. It's something I've embraced long ago, and have no intention of letting go.
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You know when you posted this comment (18 weeks ago ), I was originally trying to figure out what you meant when you said the clop scene was really short. Now that I've done so many more, which are much longer. I can certainly see what you mean. I think in the beginning I was nervous when I wrote these scenes, but now that I've gotten much better with them, I know I can do the next love scene between Luna and David justice. It will be much longer and won't feel rushed, plus I seem to have discovered that happy medium between sensual and emotional, all while keeping things from being too rauchy. I'm very grateful for your comment. Thank you!
Very good my friend it really shows that side of Luna that is loving and caring so ya all hail queen luna
Hey Jadex!
I noticed that in this fic, you particularly gravitated towards the use of the word winsome. It's like the Barney song, or "The Sond that Never Ends", fine the first two or three times it's done, but after the 20th time, we're crying out, "Make it stop, make it stop!" This fic is full of win and then some. As I've commented another story of yours. Mix it up, use a thesaurus, because, being too heavy handed with a word, can and does cause us, the reader, to tire and loath frequent usage of a word. "Variety is the spice of life" can be applied to our word usage and linguistic communications.
I especially liked the hairbrushing scene. Very excellent in its execution. Did you have any inspiration from which you drew, when crafting this heartwarming scene?
Peace,
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Those notices were mainly for the human x pony haters that don't always pay attention to the tags.
Luna really is best pony! Oh, and glad you enjoyed my song choice.
3358207 I agree Luna is best pony! Love your stories btw!
This is just too love dovie for me, that why I'm not going to read anymore, I did give this story 10 chapters, before I made a decision. Obviously I won't be fav'ing this of "Thumbs Up" it either. But I won't be "Thumbs Down" it also, the grammar is better than a lot of stories I've read, and the story is..... ok. Its just as I said, to lovie dovie for me. Anyway I wish you luck now and in the future.
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I'm intrigued, what were you expecting this story to be? Romance Tag, the title, seems obvious it was going to get this way. I'm not criticizing you, just seems odd you'd go into a story like this then leave because it's too, "lovie dovie."
Oh boy, I hope the honeymoon phase passes quickly this is starting to be a little much to read.
Love the story princess luna is best pony