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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW Cliff Hanger. Great chapter man i was enjoyed this very much i hope to see more Have a mustache
An update! An update from our long hidden author! Gods of literature be praised!
*reads*
Dear gods of literature! What a cliffhanger!!!
What's going to happen to the ponies? Oh yeah who cares about the human but the ponies! You're not going to turn this story all dark and start killing off ponies are you?
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FUUUUCKING CLIFFHANGERS
MIND FUCK, FUCKING EPIC, FUCKING ROMANTIC. AND LOTS N" LOTS-o-FUCK.
Alright! Luna's going to own him like a boss!
YES!! IT'S UPDATED AGAIN!! AWESOME CHAPTER, MAN!! DON'T LEAVE US HANGING FOR LONG!
Hmm. Roast David, my favourite!
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Good question. Short answer is "no". But...some ponies will be harmed and a few may perish (don't worry, I'm not planning on killing off any of our beloved characters), and this certainly is not going to be a violence/gore fest. You'll have to keep reading to see where this is going, I don't want to say too much and risk spoiling anything. I have a good path in mind for this story...I just need to get there. I probably have a minimum of 11 chapters to go with this story yet. And my evil brain has already got material in the works, going beyond the major plot I'm currently enacting in this story.
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We'll have to see. The good news, is the part of chapter 10 I have completed, is the remainder of the fight.
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I'm hoping that's good.
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Indeed!
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Well, I had to keep you interested now, didn't I?
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I'm hoping not to, but I need to update my Celestia fic, and have some other works in progress. But I'll make sure that 3 months+ don't go by before the next update. I'm sorry about that.
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Yeah, David really got roasted...didn't he?
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Admit it, you like'm! It keeps your interest piqued for the next chapter!
Nice chapter here, you've done a good job so far balancing romance and character development versus that of plot progression. We finally have some action from the villains between what we are all assuming to be Bonbon's disappearance and now the fight scene we were witness to. That does raise one thing, apparently David has some sort of inherent power (I am guessing) as one does not take a fire breath to the face and typically come out still standing, or conscious for that matter. And of course, he has some sort of quality that seems to make all the mares swoon somewhat, just saying.
Good job, and looking forward to the next chapter of this story and of course your other stories too. You're one of the few authors that have done 2nd person POV stories that I could actually read, they're just so odd.
Well this was an epic chapter.
Oh the cliffhanger.
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*hands jaydex a big box labled red shirts* for when the action ramps up in scale
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That does raise one thing, apparently David has some sort of inherent power (I am guessing) as one does not take a fire breath to the face and typically come out still standing, or conscious for that matter.
You're just going to have to keep reading, and find out what I have planned. That goes for all the events around the villians as well.
And of course, he has some sort of quality that seems to make all the mares swoon somewhat, just saying.
I wouldn't say all the mares. And rest assured, David won't be one of those cliche humans that has all the mares beating a path to his door, so to speak. But I have plans where all this is going.
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Glad you enjoyed it! And this is only the tip of the iceberg!
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Don't fret, I'll try not to leave you hanging too long!
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I think he'll need it! Thanks!
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Hope not, I can feel my hoof starting to slip!
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Yup, I was just having some fun speculating, you've been dropping hints left and right that there is more to him than meets the eye, and this chapter simply confirmed it even if you haven't told us just what yet. It helps me keep the driving desire for more back just a little bit... Actually, it doesn't, but it's still fun to do regardless!
Once again, another chapter that again proves that jaydex is a fanfic LEGEND!
This is sexy as always Jaydex :D
AMAZING JOB!!!
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Speculate away. I enjoy the kinds of comments that come from speculation! Just don't expect me to give away anything major. If I could but only share a fraction of what I have planned with you. But it'd spoil way too much of the story. All I can say (and forgive the sheer cliche nature of this next statement), but it's only going to get better from here on out!
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*pulls you and Daring Do up from the side of the cliff* You may hang out along the cliff, but there's no need to hang from it! FYI I have 1900 words of chapter 10 done already. But I will be moving to my Celestia fic next. 600 people are waiting for a new chapter!
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Oh come now...do you really think I'm a fanfic legend? cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-tblush.png I hardly know what to say. cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-swshock.png
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Why thank you! Have a Brohoof! cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-brohoof.png
Looks like this chapter of the story will make me I hope chapter10 will be amazing then the last.Oh wait it will be cuz your TheShadowKnight.(Where the buck is Bonbon at?)don't tell me.
(54 or 53 days left)<----not important.
Ah man... dat cliffhanger.
Oh sweet Celestia... How long do you think this story will go on for? (As long as possible I hope :3) And I like it when you say that it will get better!
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There's really no telling. I suspect the current storyline will last for at least 11 more chapters, but I've already been kicking around ideas for beyond this current plot. So who knows. And it will get better. The feels will really intensify as this goes on. And there will be plenty of intrigue as well!
1403079 SO MUCH WIIIINN! I am so happy, Good job Jaydex! Can't wait for the future :D
1394811 Tis.
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Yeah, if i had more free time, I'd gladly go back and fix those darn errors. Whenever I re-read the old chapters, I see my poorer grammar, and the lack of commas. If I get some extra time, I'll gladly go back and fix those mistakes. But for now, I need to keep pressing onward. If's interesting. From the older chapters to the newer ones, you can see the evolution of my writing.
I appreciate the critique, the good parts and the bad parts. It helps me see where I need to improve. And I'm glad you have enjoyed the later chapters, included Chapter 9! As I've told other readers, this story will just get better.
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Yeah, my portrayal of Luna is most likely why this fic isn't nearly as popular as most Luna fics. But while I love the episode "Luna Eclipsed", I don't care for their massive change to her character. Her look and her everything changed in just one season. In fact in the original pilot, Nightmare Moon (Luna) didn't speak in olde English with the royal "We", so that's why I didn't care for it as much in the season 2 episode. But Luna is my favorite pony, and her season 2 persona grew on me. I just chose to write her the way I like her best, which is a little more causal. Besides, the way she walked around in "Luna Eclipsed", she wasn't followed everywhere by her guards, so I took the creative liberty to deduce that maybe she's not a obsessed with being 100% proper royalty all the time. Just my own take on Luna. Maybe it's good, maybe it sucks. Who's to say?
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I fixed it, and thank you for pointing that out. Also, glad you enjoyed the chapter. I'll be getting to more before too long! I won't let another 3 months + go by this time. Sorry about that.
Just humming the tune to tequila whilst the battle between rend and luna happen/David and rend don't mind me.
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I've completed 9 chapters of it and I still have quite a ways to go with this story. But when you all get to read the two biggest events I have planned for this story alone! Oh my gosh, that should really spur some interest in this story from start to finish.
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I think it feels a little rushed, because unlike my Celestia fic, I didn't detail the missing days. I had six days go by and didn't both to detail any of the events that happened, rather i inferred them. At least that's my conclusion as to why it feels rushed.
Yes, I have finally read this story and I love it! Nice mix of romance, action, and slice of life. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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I have a ton more planned for this story. I'll be surprised if I can finish this story in under 20 chapters, which means I have at least 11 more to go. Chapter 10 is at about 25% right now. I concluded the battle and have woven my web of intrigue even better!
1499804 Awesome. That battle is pretty cool, I actually needed to see how to write out action scenes and I think you did it pretty well.
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It's okay. You aren't the only one that felt that way. I think some other readers may have missed the line about six days having passed since Luna arrived at David's place. But I will disregard it. And being someone who works all night-shift, I can know what it's like to make a remark while not thinking clearly. But it's all good!
Goddamnit. Shit was getting real!
Oh well, back to refreshing my tablet on an hourly basis waiting for an update.
BTW, how the hell did David survive? Shouldn't he be running circles on fire? Only his clothes were singed? Humans are sorta durable (tail flick is fairly accurate), but fire would leave him with second or third degree burns. That alone would is enough to cripple movement and cause blood loss.
Not bitching, bit there is more to this David fella, isn't there?
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You're catching on. And you will have to wait for the next chapter to find out just what's up with his ability to take a barrage of flame and still stand.
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Thank you! It's thanks to awesome readers like you, that I have an endless drive to keep writing these stories!
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Yes, yes I do. You're the first to comment about Lyra's chanting.
so this is what you were doing while your dbz fic was oh hiatus
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This is only one of the many projects that stole the focus from my DBZ fic. But as I said, I will be working on Dragon Ball Pony Z again. I just need to finish my Christmas Story first. Then I'll be working on episode 6. I should also get back to this story as well. Thank goodnesss my job should be slowing down come January and I should have more free time again.
can't wait for the next part you mix romance action and the little funny moments well keep up the good work i'm injying this storie.