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Aww yiss, new chapter. Glad to have you back Jaydex!
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It's great to be back! Hope you enjoy the new chapter!
The title made me think of the song "Total Eclipse of the Heart" by Bonnie Tyler.
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That song helped to partially inspire this story and the title.
Excellent!
Jeez, I was drinking a cup of tea when I read the part about Luna telling David to make love to her. Almost spit out my drink.
Jeez, I was drinking a cup of tea when I read the part about Luna telling David to make love to her. Almost spit out my drink.
Anyway, good job on this chapter! Hope to see more soon.
Jeez, I was drinking a cup of tea when I read the part about Luna telling David to make love to her. Almost spit out my drink.
Anyway, good job on this chapter! Hope to see more soon.
God I'm so happy there's finally an update. And I'm so full of heart warming fuzzy feels that I need a hug now. Thank you for an extremely beautiful chapter. I could go into a lot of details over all those little things that make this romantic piece so lovely but I'm too lazy. Fuck it, it's just so awesome.
TURN AROUND BRIGHT EYES
*raises tea cup* Ah another fine chapter my friend. Come now such work deserves a reward here is a cup of tea. Anyone else wants some? *sips*
Another great chapter that filled my heart with a warm feeling. Now I want to see what David will do when he's back in Ponyville!
As Gabe Newell would say, it was worth the weight.
Great chapter Jaydex! :D
Of course another great chapter from one of my favorite stories on FIMfiction. A huge smile ran across my face at work when I got the email saying this story had a new chapter. Definitely made my night. Keep'm comin.
At last!
When I need love by Leo Sayer.
Wonderful work, mate. All the emotion and love was spot on.
Until next time
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Excellent Chapter. After wondering of when this story would be updated, it comes back swinging with this chapter. The music "Luna's Night" was given a touching backstory that I really liked. They way it's played int he story, having it composed by Luna's previous lover, the emotions emitted. Just, perfect.
And so the wait begins for the next installment. Hopefully the wait won't be as long as this one took.
Now back to you brighten my day. and here, have a mustache for ur awsome work
beautifuli love the songs
Another excellent update, Jaydex.
Ah,so much endless desire of love and well lust, for David & Luna.
The chapter is rather well outstanding in ever area of the the story.
But I would say this is not a clop chapter...Its a blissful love-chapter-thing.
And I like it.
Oh, I just notice that you will get 1,000 followers soon:just 4-5 more people.
OH,WELCOME BACK AND STUFF.HERE HAVE ONE FREE ICE CREAM
CAKE.
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How come it took you by surprise. Luna's loving request marked the fourth time they made love in this story.
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That's okay, you don't need to go into details. I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hopefully it won't be over eight months till the next update. Thankfully I have some of chapter 12 started already.
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Hey, thanks for the tea! Is it an herbal blend of mint? I love mint tea. Also I'm delighted that you and most of the others are enjoying this new chapter.
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You and me both, I have the chapter outlined, but it's always fun to see things unfold as I write them. It will be another good chapter, and a little pegasi told me to let you know another two-parter is upon us!
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Thank you, my friend! I can hardly wait to work on the next chapter, but now it's Celestia's and/or Rainbow Dash's turn for some attention, and then I need to give some to Jeanne and Twilight as well.
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Your comment made my day! I'll be sure to keep the stories coming. This story will be getting another update a lot sooner than this recent one.
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I know, right! I can't believe it took so long.
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I'll have to check that out.
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Thanks a bunch! I wanted this chapter to really build on the romance between David and Luna. Looks like it turned out better than I hoped.
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I'm glad you liked the back story for the song "Luna's Night". I thought it would give David some more details on Luna's past and at the same time, his reaction would help to strengthen their bond. Don't worry, I don't think you'll be waiting nearly as long for the next update. And on a plus note, chapter 12 is already started.
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"You Brighten My Day" is up for an update. So I'll be working on that next.
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You and me both. I must admit I really enjoyed writing and editing this chapter. The songs blended so nicely with my story.
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Thank you, my friend! I aim to please!
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I wouldn't call it clop either. But some seem to think that sex = clop. But I really like adding romance to my stories, it makes the love scenes so much deeper.
I think this chapter was the best yet for this story. Now onto Celestia's!
Ooh, Ice Cream cake! Yummy! I'll enjoy that...with gusto (much enthusiasm or great enjoyment)!
The feels.... I'm going to have to fight a loin to regain my man card.
Nice to see you updating again your stories are always enjoyable, have a song that i think also fits Luna
It is nice to see an update for this story. Great to know that is alive and well. Awesome work.
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The actual title is "When I need you".
Man I missed this story! I can't remember how many times I reread it before this update!
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That's the kind of stuff I love to hear. I'll make sure the next update doesn't take nearly as long as this one did. Thankfully I have a good start to chapter 12 already, but it's now Celestia's turn for an update.
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Okay, when I have a chance, I'll be sure to check that out!
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This story is definitely alive and will continue. I'm not sure exactly, but I think this will be at least a 20 chapter story.
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Thanks for the song, I'll be sure to give it a proper listen, hopefully in the morning.
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Letting the feels get to you is hardly something that will take away your man card.
3180154 Well it's how she said it. To be this direct is surprising to me.
Finally, an update! And a great one at that!
Deviously romantic, that's the best I could describe this story so far.
Can't wait till the futures next chapter!
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Well, not to sound crass, but what did you think was going to happen when Luna asked David to join her in bed? Especially following her lovely serenade, and keeping in mind the events earlier that day in Canterlot with Rend - I hardly think Luna was being overly forward, when you take all those things into account. Wouldn't you agree?
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I was hoping this would be one of the best chapters yet.
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Thank you, I can hardly wait to continue with this story. And one thing I really enjoy about writing this is the romance.
3187141 Just sleep?
Hey man... Long time no talk! Glad to see another chapter is out. I hope I'll be able to write half as good as you after my writing class is done this year! Guess who inspired me to take it? :3
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Wow, I haven't heard from you in what feels like forever. Yep chapter 11 is finally done. Hope you like it. Oh, you're taking a writing class. Hmmm, you want me to guess who inspired you to take it. Well, I don't think it was me, ah, it must have been Luna.
I like this story better than u brighten my days cause it's.........Magically EPIC
Any tips to write a story?
OMG another amazing chapter very well done now I wait for the next awesome chapter :)
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I'm glad you think this story is so grand. I've always enjoyed it, even if it hasn't done quite as well as Celestia's story.
As for tips on writing a story. Well, one big tip I can offer is make use of 3rd person style, it allows for the most flexibility, and as for a topic, write about a character or characters you like the best. Oh, and before you start writing, brainstorm ideas and it never hurts to do some outlining - this way you know where you want your story to go and what it's going to accomplish. And even when you do write, don't worry if it's doesn't seem good to start. That's the beauty of the editing/proofreading process.
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I was happy to see a comment from you! Glad you enjoyed the new chapter! Hopefully it won't be nearly as long till chapter 12 will be completed.
and briefly putting his ear there to half-listen to her heart beating.
okay maybe not but it's what I would do (what? I like heartbeats* )
anyway this is a very feel-riffic chapter and I seriously mean that truthfully
*only simulated at this stage, not the natural sound far as I know
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Actually, if I had thought about it, I'd have added that. If you recall, I had Daniel and Celestia enjoy each other's heartbeats in the last chapter of Celestia's story. So, I'm all for it.
Glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks for reading!
3214992 Oh I seriously do not remember that. I'll certainly look there and see for myself.
I'm glad that you're glad and I welcome your thanks!
Took me long time to read this finally caught up, great work.
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Thank you, I put a lot of care into this chapter.
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! There will be more to come and things are about to heat up!
i was really hoping someone else had made this joke already, but i checked and no one has so oh well.
3356997 I've seen pleanty of fics where ponies get pregnant by humans.