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MOAR JUST MOAR
Good chapter, although to be completely honest, I was hoping for some more human-mane 6 interactions...
Only came across one spelling error (that I'm aware of):
If you truly lover her
I like this proceeding of events. Love shall conquer all!
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png This chapter was AWESOME! Do I sense some foreshadowing to a later part of the story? I shall await the next chapter.
Every time you post a new chapter... Every time it gets stuck in my head... AND I NEED YOU NOW TONIGHT! AND I NEED YOU MORE THAN EVER!
Amazing, yet again. tho the first three chapters were still the best
Awesome! Keep it up!
A lot of short sentences this chapter.
Other than that, no problems I can see. Please merge the sentences, it feels like they're talking in stutter-step.
Second
Love this story for its interesting plot line, keep up the good work.
ok based on the profacie it is saying this...
something will either...
A.possess princess luna and she will become something like nightmare moon again..
or B.something will show up and take over equestria.
and the solution is luna and davids love will end up solveing the problem.
Thank you everyone for the comments and feedback! I am eager to start chapter 6. Which I will begin this evening.
Mad Library Scientist - Thanks for spying that error. I have corrected it. And don't despair in regards to the human-mane 6 interactions. This story is still only warming up, plus Chapter 5 was titled "The Reception - Part 1". The main event is yet to come! But that's all I'm going to say.
To give you all some long range idea of this story...based on the plot I'm working out, I'll be surprised if this story doesn't reach at least 20 chapters in length or maybe even more. As long as it remains popular, I'll keep working on it!
Oh and Skylight Blast - Right now I'd have to agree with you. The first three chapters are still the best. But I needed the others to advance the storyline. I will be getting back to David and Luna's romance more in depth, but first I have to finish with the remainder of "First Contact".
Anyone in love with Luna is a lucky one, Human or Pony, just keep her happy.
MOAR
I have to say, this chapter was (for me) not as good as the others...
I can't exactly explain why, but it just was.
BUT!
With this prophecy at the end of the chapter you got me^^
There is no doubt I will stick with this story as I can't wait for what's happening to Equestria.
Great job so far!
i was wondering about something, namely about Lyra, i mean in every story i have read where shes in it is always like that, that she would always be a bit crazy about humans and would like to doe nothing more then actually meet one, but i wonder who actually decided that in the frst place that she would be crazy about humans, i mean i cant remember her saying anything like that in the show
For Luna - I really appreciate your comment. I have to say you're not alone. I know this may sound weird coming from the author, but I'm not quite as satisfied with the last two chapters, as I am with the first three. What I think may be bothering us is that "first contact" is stealing the focus from David and Luna. The first three chapters dealt mostly with them and the beginning of their romance. I am happy to inform you that in future chapters I am planning on giving them both more focus. And I am glad I took the gambit with the prophecy. I was hoping adding some of the adventure elements would keep readers interested. I can tell you that once I get through the rest of first contact, things will really pick up from there.
Martadore - Originally I wasn't even planning on putting Lyra in this story. But when I got to reading comments left by the others and remembered all the fannon I've read about Lyra and her love of humans, I felt adding her might make things more interesting. Besides Lyra did help me avoid a nasty case of writer's block. I too am curious as to who decided that she should be that way.
Oh no you didn't...
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Why do I get the feeling Lyra is going to cause some kind of trouble, intentional or not.
Ha! Lol in my mind i see why she was chanting if u know what i mean
SILENCE!!!!!!!
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“You wanna go back to sleep now? But it’s nearly nine. I’m surprised you didn’t get up and make breakfast by now.”
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I fear Lyra will have a massive hoof in said prophecies.
*momentuous.
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I fixed it, thanks for pointing that out! My day!
im pretty sure the ? after I'm better than ok is supposed to be a ! C:
572053>>572416 Whether you both have already learned of this in the year (or close to it) that you both commented or you haven't, the root of Lyra's "human obsession" came about from the way she sat on a park bench like a person in Dragonshy.
because I smell trouble?
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there can not be a once a quiet story with only a few farce without the predictions of disaster or some weirdo who wants to conquer the throne??
too much to ask???
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