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Another entertaining and lengthy chapter. I shall await the next.
so good....
MOAR!
640697 I see your squee and raise you a yay!
Awesome! I need more!
The villains have made their entrance! We have what appear to be the Diamond Dogs working as minions for some creature made of mist kidnapping ponies for unknown purposes.....Things are going to get interesting very quickly it would appear....
A fantastic chapter for a fantastic story. My only regret is that I didn't find this sooner. Have a favorite and a thumb. You know what, take some mustaches for extra "manliness" as well . It seems like David might need them to get through the rest of the story.
I'm loving the progression, and the pacing is excellent.
Great work on another fabulous chapter, keep up the good work.
-Jorofrarie
here's a song for Luna and David ----------> Link
OK i figured it out.
the nightmare ("pony of mist") is having the diamond dogs kidnapping ponys for who knows what purpose (probably to find a new body) and the nightmare is going to take QUITE a interest in David and either A.David gets possessed by the nightmare or B.Luna gets possessed by the nightmare. and the love for the other person makes them break free from the nightmares control and possession.
that sound right?
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Thank you for the comment. Things will be getting exciting very soon! But I have a few more chapters till anything major involving the villains begins. However there will be more little glimpses building around the villains in the next few chapters to keep you hungrier still...for more! And thanks for the mustaches! Oh and I have to agree with you about finding this. Given the popularity of this story, I'm saddened that the only referral is one I made on 4chan's pony board in a Luna thread. But I'm glad you found it just the same!
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Glad you like the pacing. I hope I can continue to Deliver!
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Thanks for the song! I think it fits them very well! I should also mention a bunch of songs I've been listening to, both vocal and various video game bgm have been inspiring me for this. I may add links to these songs to help with events in the story's later chapters!
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Sorry to burst your bubble...but that theory is incorrect! I am not going to spoil anything...but I will tell you that the mist is not the nightmare looking to possess anyone. But in addition to David & Luna's romance, there are two more major plot elements in the works and I will not be divulging anything about them! I need to keep you all interested after all!
Oh and fire up your hearts everypony! The romance between David and Luna is going to really heat up in Chapter 7!! But that's all I'm gonna say for now!
649019 OK i guess i should not figure that every time i hear "mist pony" it is the nightmare. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
ze plot has thickened i would like to know more
I need another chapter this story is addicting
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Glad you're both enjoying it!
Have no fear! I'm nearly done writing the rough draft of Chapter 7! If all goes well I'll finish it tonight and might even begin Chapter 8. I will still need time to make corrections and edit Chapter 7, but I am projecting it will be ready by the weekend! I'd shoot for sooner, but wish to take my time. I want this to just keep getting better!!
Question for you. Is David Luna's first special somepony? If so, then I feel you should edit their first intimate moment together, to show this is her first relationship.
1111 views.
This pleases me.
Okay, maybe I was jumping the gun on my last comment.
its funny that daffodil's are poisons to humans :P
A BLT without Bacon just seems so unappetizing to me. If I wanted lettuce, tomato, and toasted bread, I'd just eat a damn salad with croutons!
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First, it's Millennium.
Second: A millennium is 2,000 years so it says a human hasn't been in Equestria in both 2,000 years when it uses numbers, and 4,000 years when it says 2 millennium
diamond dogs + shitstorm incoming
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Wrong on both counts.
Millennia is the plural for Millennium.
And a Millennium is only one thousand years, not two.
Im kinda confused, why is it that Applejack introduces hes self to David, 2 times? did I miss something here?