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Stotter


Just a brony who joined the herd shortly before season 4, making up for lost time as I go stotting around the fandom, enjoying it's works and hoping to contribute.

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A mule colt, son of a donkey and mare, is going to start school in an all pony class like his mom's side of the family before him. He's optimistic about the better nature of ponies and eager to learn and make friends. Things go well during class, but you know there are two fillies who are just waiting for their chance to tell him what they think of mules.

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Can't say much about this that hasn't been done a million times before already.

One-trick pony and "blank flank" originator, Diamond Tiara, and Silver Spoon, pick on new kid. White Knight Crusaders intervene and scare off bullies. New kid gets invited to their club and tells parents how day went.

Classic Show vs Tell. And this was all Tell. Still 20ish hours though so best of luck!


Well, that's 1 out of 56.

"You know what one’s greatest moment of destiny is? Some may think it’s when you get your cutie mark, but what I speak of extends beyond the boundaries of species. I speak of course about meeting your true love. See, this is a pretty great moment isn’t it?” :rainbowlaugh: Who did you pay for that line? My little brother? :rainbowlaugh: I felt it could have used a bit more plot and dialogue, but fair story nonetheless.

This was really cute. I love Hubert's attitude and his Dad's story absolutely made me *d'awwww*

I'm assuming you were referring to the CMC but the colour choices you used confused me a bit. Just felt like Hubert's vocabulary suddenly increased for no reason. :twilightsheepish:

Either way, this was very sweet. Bravo!

4931927 I was waiting for someone to notice that.:ajsmug: My headcannon is that in a world of pastel-colored ponies, even preschoolers would have a more extensive knowledge of different colors than in our world.

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