• Member Since 11th Jul, 2014
  • offline last seen Dec 19th, 2015

Stotter


Just a brony who joined the herd shortly before season 4, making up for lost time as I go stotting around the fandom, enjoying it's works and hoping to contribute.

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Rainbow Dash needs Applejack's help to convince her dad that she's too close to her friends in Ponyville to be set up with any stallions in Cloudsdale. Can she really help it if things happen so that he thinks these two are closer than friends? Now Applejack thinks she's being sized up as Dash's friend while Rainbow Blaze thinks he's judging a fiancé. How long until Applejack and Rainbow Blaze realize they're having two different conversations?

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Comments ( 7 )

Well, this was a good anti-ship

i like that:heart:, but i don´t take one chapters to my fvourite usually, have to think about it.

Change the tense. It's really weird reading stuff when in present tense. That's more for scripts and plays, not stories. Past tense is more adequate.

Wait it just ended? kinda left us with very little, don't you think.
Anyways for what was there it was good and rather funny. Good job, i see a cookie in you'r future. :raritywink:
~Tobben

Only nitpick is it's in present tense. Please change it, it feels weird. The only stories I can see working in present are first person ones, and this isn't first person.

Other than that, adorable!

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