Bravo sir, bravo. A wonderful end to a wonderful story. Though for some reason, i have small inkling in the back of my head telling me, for some reason, that you're not completely finished with this series. I think thats because of the conversation with discord, but i could be wrong who knows what the future holds.

Anyway, ill be looking out for your future projects. If they are anything even close to this level of awesome, they'll be worth the read. I wish you good luck and hope to see you soon sir.

This has been a wonderful story to read the first part tof this story was the very first story I ever read on this website and thanks to you I have read many other great storys. I am sad to see this come to an end but am looking forward to the next story you write and a small but very loud part of me hopes that THERE WILL BE A SEQUAL but the way you ended it was wonderful with enough closer to be happy with and know every thing will be alright and more wonder to think about what happens next.

I was hoping for a happy ending where Mac and Twi would get together but I guess not all those stories have those happy sappy endings. Ah well, hopefully we'll see something with a bit more cheer in the future.

Love this story, friend! Truly amazing. I'm so glad you had the good ending be cannon. Redemption always warms my heart. It's why I love MLP. Things work out. Please, keep up the amazing work.

And so our story begins once again

I really loved this story, keep up the good work

Wonder if you have anything planned for moonlight sparkle in the future?

*applauds*
*stands up and applauds some more*
keep up the awesome work and you might get an AWESOME SEQUELL out of this... (please?)

one of the best stories i've ever read

MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!! Oh and A Mustache

Magnificent work, good sir. I salute you.

929435 I knew some one was going to coment on me saying Discord was infected,I knew that the mixing of discords blood with that of a unicorns caused the virus I was just making a stupid post for the fun of it. I did just think of something however if he got freed fom just 3 ponys arguing I wonder how much chaos was going on during the battle for canterlot maybe he broke out agian and was makeing blood come out of his eyes to mess with twilight or because the virus was made because of Discords blood and she is a carrier maybe they have some sort of psycic link to each other because she could control other infected. But all of this is just me coming up with ideas with no facts to back them up but that is the fun in a open ending like this you can come up with ideas on what happens next.

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Possibly a different seal holding him in because twilight and her friends resonated better or something. I've seen so many fics and a few actual cannon episodes that contained much more chaos than some quarreling fillies (even if they weren't in the same close proximity) which may mean that it isn't the AMOUNT you cause but the proximity in which you cause it. Perhaps no fights broke out in that area of the gardens.

Oh, and I totally have scene in my head for later down the road (say about 20 years) when another out break happens and Twilight's daughter fights her way to the carriers only to find them dead (by long sword wounds and magical burns) with a few other guard ponies from the famed pegasus "shadow unit" and a mysterious carrier (completely covered and mostly unhurt) leaning over one of the dead guards. They fight, the mysterious carrier plays defensively and tries to plead and run instead of fight but gets wounded, she strikes a deal to lead the Afflicted away and spare the battered army that is faltering under the horde in return for her life. The bargain is up held and the daughter sneaks a curious look at a violet tail with similar streaks to her own (except for the missing blonde streak). It just started running rampant so I thought I'd drop it off here since I don't really feel like making a spin off story to your alternate universe based off of one fight scene. :P

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I happen to say that because I never thought about it before.

This was one of THE most epic stories I have ever read. "Don't Go Outside..." and "Don't Go Outside II..." are now two of my most favourite stories and I loved every bit of it. I can't possibly thank you enough for writing this piece of art.
Thank you, sir. Thank you very much.

At the end of the first dont go outside you implied that there would be multiple installments....?

Yes, you did state that there will be multiple installments.

This is the best story ever. I like it better than really books! If you wrote more about this that'd be

SO
FUCKING
AWESOME!

Well after finishing both stories in two days because of its epicness I thought it would be a good idea to leave my parting thoughts. First off, I love both of these stories and I especially loved the begginning of the first one and the twi fight seen in the middle of this one. One quick critique though is that I hate catie, and spike's fates. They become pointless background characters that are in a chapter and are never mentioned again. It would have been awsome to see what happened to them. They werent even mentioned in the prologue! Did big mac adopt them or something? So much lost potential. Also, "To late shitlight sparkle, you loose". Best line of the whole series in my opinion. Also, it would be kinda lame to do the whole arm comes outa the grave trick then end and never be sequel. There is going to be a sequel right? All in all though, this is definetly in line with some of my most favorite fanfics. please continue!

Another truly amazing story finished in the 'Don't Go Outside...' Saga! I stayed up until 1:40 last night just to finish this story in one day, and it was definitely worth it! I can't wait to start reading Don't Go Outside...Origins! Keep up the good work Wolokai!!!

What a wonderful tale! Thank you very much sir for donating your time to write such awesome literature for the world to enjoy.

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All equally valid and good points! I've received a few other comments about what you've mentioned from others as well. I'll be sure to try and address them in the next installment! Thanks!

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I reread fics all the time to refresh my mind of them! Though it usually had to be a pretty damn good fic to warrant rereading...
As for your question, let's just say I've a bad habit of not taking into account when a comment was posted before I reply to it.

OH SHIT THERE IS A THIRD

I TAKE BACK IT ALL

YOU ARE A BEAUTIFUL CREATURE AND I LOVE YOU

SPOILERS
So what happened with Catie? What happened with Spike? All of a sudden they disappeared? What about Applebloom? Why suddenly Big Mac does not care in the least for his family and his little sister? If we think for a second, Twilight came out very well from the first novel. Actually, he did not lose anybody really close. But then he goes mad with hatred and revenge and decides to kill all mares, stalions and fillys of Equestria, her close friends, his family, the girl who saved and vowed to protect, her lover, everyone, for revenge because her teacher betrayed and killed SOME of his neighbors? If the argument was that Twilight is fully consumed by the virus, well, at least it would be understandable, but it is quite clear that Twilight though influenced by the virus, has rationality and coherence, and so that has not sense at all.
I'd really liked "Do not Go Outside". Although the final did not convince me much, mostly I found it a very good history of psychological horror and action. Then, in this novel you chose to develop an action story, which though different is appreciable. With clear inspiration in some of the great sagas of the zombie genre (I think Resident Evil references are huge), it could have developed into something very entertaining. However I think there is a difference between making a action novel (where one can be less demanding on the narrative plot, and where even many clichés and "stereotypes" are welcome) and to be neglected to the development of a good plot. I see too many plot holes, forced reactions and uses of surprising "twists" for forcing the history to continue. I really liked "Don't go outside" (At least his 3/4) and loved "Rainbow Dash Vs the Wild", so if I am something hard, it's because I think you can write with much higher quality than this. Saluts

Where the hell is pinkie in all this!?

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Where is pinkie why did the author have to leave her out?

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WHY IS NO ONE TALKING ABOUT THE FACT THAT PINKIE IS MISSING ENTIRELY FROM THIS STORY! Jeez! Can someone please tell me why pinkie isn’t in this story he has all the characters in there but her um why? You know she’s part of the mane cast right? That’s like having the looney tunes without Daffy Duck or Disney without Donald Duck. I don’t think I saw fluttershy in there either but still.