Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon have always had something against the Cutie Mark Crusaders. But when one of them discovers how badly they've treated them something changes.
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death to diamond!
4842158 thanks XD
Thank you!
4842181 Hmm maybe? Lol
4842218 yay!
Me like it =P
To be honest, everything is happening way to fast. A lot happens in just 1000 words. If I was the one writing this, i would have reached the 1000 words at the part Silver said she was sorry. The idea is good, has been done before, but in a different way.
If this turns in a romance of silver x cmc, then I recommend you to read this story:
The Serenade of Silver Belles.
It's always silver never diamonds
Hard to follow,I only had a vauge sense of what was going on, also way too fast.
I can't help but notice this story is missing a few details. Like, almost everything. For instance: How did SS get into the CMC when she already has a Cutie Mark? Also, what is the reason for SS's sudden moral 'transformation'? And we know DT can be a bit of a b*tch, but I think ATTEMPTED MURDER is a bit extreme... even for her. All these questions might seem minor to you, but without answering them your story stands on a very flimsy premise indeed. I shall look forward to you answering them in the near future. Or, perhaps not.
4843239 I noticed this too but remember this is my first story so... Yea I'll try to do like a flashback in the next chapter
4843239 oh and also she isn't trying to kill her lol they threated to kick her family out of ponyville
Hey I know you might be busy but I just need to know if you're still good for doing the role I gave you.
How do you suppose Silver Spoon would look as a senior citizen?
4843586 agreed.
too fast, and not enough detail.
You said chapters once a week, over a year ago. This is still the only chapter. AJ is not amused