One of Pinkie Pie's greatest joys is making people laugh, but when she discovers that laughter can kill, that joy transforms into an ugly, disgusting nightmare that can only end in tears.
Meanwhile, the Cutie Mark Crusaders are off to the Everfree Forest to find and catch an elusive, needle shooting creature they heard about at school. Will they find it? Will they finally earn their cutie marks? You'll have to read the story to find out, now, won't you?
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Um... I'm honestly not sure what to say about this.
Pretty awesome story, though. I greatly enjoyed reading it.
4817774 I'm honestly not sure I wrote the ending right. It was supposed to come off as cartoony, like Spongebob or something, but I think I got the tone completely wrong.
4817792 yes yea you did, it's a little creepy, you could have ending where she starts laughing like crazy, has a heart attack, nurse red heart wasn't pricked and saves her life
Welp, I changed the ending in a very lazy way.
:/
:p
woah.
um
You should not have to much of a good thing, even laughter. Just ask one Pinkamena Diane Pie. When she found that something that once gave her joy, and happiness made the world fall around her hooves.
Its simply how the punchline ends... Here in the Twilight Zone.
...Um...
What just happened?
Hum... For some reason this sounds familiar... Must have read it before... Shall we reread one day, eh?