EDIT: Kudos to everyone who's faved this. I'm sorry it's taking so long for the first chapter to come out, but I had writer's block for the longest time. After a trip to L.A., a thunderstorm, an infestation and an awesome party I can finally write again :) Have fun!
Ebony Dusk was cursed from the beginning. 2,000 years ago, Celestia supposedly destroyed her and cast her to stone. She was forced to watch her loved ones disappear and see new rulers take her place.
What Celestia didn't know is that the Curse of Stone can be broken. Once she was freed, she started a war that will never end. And it's all because of one pony...
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Interesting story. The idea of Celestia who would have thought that she has made the perfect life form in front of her would have helped her defeat discord, but instead she was twisted and corrupted by Discord's influence, sorta like making a deal with the devil.
Any-who, nice chapter! Adds the feels that Celestia was betrayed by her own creation.
Was it real love or was discord playing with her?
4816770 Yes. That's not EXACTLY how it happened (spoilers
), but pretty darn close. I like your way of thinking.
4817022 Real love. You'll find out more about that later on
.
4824367 how would you explain discord comment of never having a friend before. To fall in love, you have to become friendly first
>> aleja08 SPOILERS: He couldn't speak of her, for it hurt too much, so he lied. He even had hopes of Fluttershy possibly replacing her if she never came back.
4824362 Thanks!
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Dear Mr Mcgucket
I know you're insane and all that, but the chapter could use some edititing as it feels... awkward.
You could say instead
But hey, it's your story, I was just trying to help you prevent more dislikes
Signed
Sir Botaglove of the Blind Eye Society
P.s. Bloody Female doglestia, you don't just make life and force it to fight. It's inequiane and breaks the first law of alchemy
She's your daughter biyach, you deal with it you lazy bum
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Nopony loves her anymore... not even me
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Thanks for the suggestion, I shall use it.
Signed,
That One Girl Who Stalks You and Lives in Your Head