• Member Since 14th Aug, 2013
  • offline last seen Apr 23rd, 2018

Night Music


Here I am, back at it again, doing absolutely nothing.

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I moved to Ponyville for one thing, privacy. Sure it's a town where everypony knows everypony, but it's big enough for a pony like me to go unnoticed, or at least, that's what I thought.

I just want a little privacy, and when I say 'a little' I mean that I just want to be left alone, left alone with my own devices. No crazy ponies trying to get me to open up or anything like that, just me and the safe feeling of isolation.

Let's just say that, Luna wasn't the only pony stuck on the moon.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 8 )

0.o wow, now this is how your start a story.

I found this on the front page, and am very glad that I did!

I want privacy too.

GOOGLE FOR ONCE DON'T SPY!! SAME GOES FOR YOU NSA

You have such a cliche generic OC. Just reading it made me cringe.

This story is still pretty meh. Your OC is still not memorable and fantastically compelling.

Thumb down for poor punctuation. Sorry.

5670864 It's all cool, every little bit of criticism helps me. (Not really, I still retain the level of punctuation as a five year old.) But either way, bad chapter, good to know.

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