• Member Since 13th Apr, 2012
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ShiningShadow1965


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It's a normal day like any other day as Twilight Sparkle mastering her spells in the Everfree forest when she was attacked by several unknown beings surrounded Twilight Sparkle ready to defend herself when a mysterious stranger jumps in and saves her life. Its about a lone freedom fighter from mobius landing in equestria and observing the ponies for months now until that fateful day.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

This is almost painful to read, I'm afraid.

1. Needs more punctuation and indenting. One huge wall of text is not pleasant to read or attracting.
2. Please, please, please don't place a note right in the middle of the text.
3. Look for a pre-reade or an editor of some sort.

Other than that, I can say that this would be an interesting read. Keep it up and don't give up. You'll get the hang of it, promise. :twilightsmile:

Where did you find that awesome cover picture for the fanfic.

DEAR GOD MAN USE PERIODS AND COMMAS

It's this program cannot upload it like in fanfiction.net there its more easier here they dont have that option.:flutterrage: i got this all set up on my phone better is on word and everything is much more simple, can anypony help me on this the up load is google which i dont care for. For that its makes everything all wonky and i have to work on it to make it right and i dont need to do that :flutterrage: I did it on microsoft word is there a way to just uploaded it without me copy and pasting that drives me up the wall.:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

I found it on the bing search engine cerebusx.:scootangel:













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You seriously don't like copying and pasting your own stuff into a different window? Uploading a file is completely pointless if you can just do that.

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its because every time i copy and paste i dont have the resources to do that the only resources is the library and that window is rarely open. thats why i have it on my phone all ready to up load immediately and i dont have these copy and pasting on this laptop the word program is not registered and no product code to use sucks:flutterrage:, and here i am im just here to upload my stuff simple and get on to other things like writing chapter 5 co-authoring another story etc., etc. Actually the thing is to me i could do that in seconds and go on while copying pasting and fixing it to my liking extra steps i dont need everything is already conveyed in my story in word the bolding the centering everything so another word waste more time fixing these again? that to me dont make sense at all.

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