Rays of Hope

by ShiningShadow1965

Chapter 1: The Stranger

Rays Of Hope
All the characters in the My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic Universe Belongs to Hasbro and Lauren Faust and also my OC belongs to me also there are references to a city in the sonic universe belongs to sega/ archie comics if anybody wants him in your story please Pm me also certain references contains in my main character like the Gundam he flies belongs to Bandai etc. ok then on with the show.

Chapter 1: The Stranger

As any other ponies knows the EverFree Forest is a very beautiful place, if you know where are you going. Sometimes this forest has that air of danger if you are not careful, but today it's relatively quiet to a certain purple unicorn whose routine led her to a clearing in the forest where she has practicing her spells and this spell in particular is Twilight is trying to levitate a big rock and then splitting it half all in the same process,

"UGH!!...Cmon lift you darn stupid rock."

As Twilight Sparkle horn begins to glow very brightly. She's been trying to master this spell for weeks now but to no avail,

"CMON!!!! I know I could do this."

Twilight focusing hard with her teeth clenched, unbeknownst to her that she is no the only being alone in the forest as other eyes are watching very cautiously and gathering data on their wrist computers calculating everything from the atmosphere to the every living being on the entire planet of Equestria.

As Twilight continues on with her magic skill practice she realized she is getting tired and decided to stop and rest a bit. "I need to eat before I pass out" Twilight thought to herself and with the bright purple aura she levitated a blanket and lunch from her saddle bag and placed it on a empty space next to her. She pulled out several small dishes of lettuce, apples, celery, and a grilled tulip sandwich. As Twilight looked at the very delicious prepared meal before her she was ready to bite into the sandwich when she heard a broken twig snapped further back in the forest as Twilight reacted with a look and called out

"Is anypony out there Hello?...........Hellllllllloooo?..........., hmmmmmmmm nothing" she thought to herself,

"I better finish my lunch and head back to Pony Ville."

Twilight spoke to herself softly when suddenly another broken twig much louder than before was more closer, Twilight heard this and shouted,

"WHOEVER PONY IS OUT THERE SHOW YOURSELF!!!!!!!!!!!!"

As she waited for a response a human came out from the deeper section of the EverFree Forest and another and another and so forth till they were everywhere. On the open field were 100 in total of humans , wearing armor and carrying weapons and looking directly at Twilight Sparkle she stood there in shock wondering

"What in all Celeistia are these creatures doing here? And what do they want?"

She thought but her question was answered by this sentence from the leader of the humans saying,

"ELIMINATE ALL RESISTANCE!!!!!!!"

As this being said this all the humans pointed their Morita MK 3's at their target Twilight spoke "What are you doing? I did nothing to provoke you!!" As she stood there in fear there was another presence that was moving into position ready to pounce Twilight shouted,

"I DON'T KNOW WHO YOU ARE?? I WILL FIGHT YOU AND STOP YOU!!!!!!!!"

As her purple horn started to glow preparing for the battle when a shout was heard,

"CHAOS SHIELD!!!!!!!!!"

With a sudden gust of wind that came after and Twilight was envolped in a bubble while a dark figure stood alone in the center of the humans they reacted by shooting at the dark figure when he phased out and the bullets missing him and some hitting on the shield where Twilight Sparkle was held in, she didn’t realize she was safe when the bullets bounced off the shield. She tried to get the attention of the dark and mysterious stranger but to no avail until there's a voice that came through to Twilight's mind

"I'm so sorry Senoirita um........." ,

"Twilight Sparkle and you?" replied,

"I’m Rodrigo Alberto DeLaMenza, but my friends call me Rodrigo" Responded,

"So? What are you doing here and who are those strange creatures that is trying to kill me?" Twilight curiously questioned,

"I will answer all your inquiries when I’m done here ok."

Rodrigo replied as he finished his sentence the telepathic link was disconnected and Rodrigo returned once more to the open field with his .50 caliber Desert Eagle Magnums drawed and started to move as a ballet dancer and proceeded to Gun Kata at his enemies (A/N: Imagine the very moves in the movie Equilibrium) and started to kill his opponents very effectively by starting with a group of 15 humans in a circle when he appeared in the center and started to block the machine gun with his pistol and put the left gun under the jaw of the solider and shot him through and the exit wound was bloody and without thinking he kicked away the other shooter weapon and used his right pistol and shot the human directly in the chest. And then he proceeded to go in a speed fury and went to other groups of the humans using blocking and kicking movements while on one shooter he was disarmed in a flash and shot with is own weapon while he flip his pistols up in the air and shot about 30 enemies.

Suddenly the guns butt protruded spikes on both guns and he used the ends and started to club them on their heads and killing 10 more of the enemy. After that the enemy started to fire at Rodrigo but to no avail he was fast moving and avoided the attacks, while Twilight looked at this display with awe and she was thinking "Wow!! he's more faster than Rainbow Dash, but who is he? I cant see his features or his face." As she continued in thought the other humans were shooting everywhere as Rodrigo reloaded his guns once more and front flipped in the air and shot very rapidly at 20 enemies killing the last of the humans. As he looked at the destruction and death all around him he shouted,

"CHAOS SHIELD BEGONE!!!!!!"

As the shield dissipate around Twilight she walked out and finally saw her rescuer facial features which he stands at 5 foot 8 inches tall with black fur all over his body with blonde on his head paws and his belly. His eyes were a very gentle ice cold blue and he has that air of confidence in him but something is also there but Twilight couldn't put her hoof on it.

He wore a black duster with black pants with a belt with a flaming skull as it buckle, also he wore black combat boots with a white muscle tee also has that flaming skull on the front and in the duster a double shoulder harness for his Magnums. But one thing that really stood out in Twilights view were two swords were strapped on his back with the handles of a snarling wolves head, while the other handle has a snarling dogs head. As Twilight approached the canine stranger very carefully, suddenly Rodrigo pulled out his sword and flinged the double edged katana at Twilight before she reacted the sword just missed her but millimeters messing up her mane at that same moment unknown to her a human was ready to shoot at Twilight when the distinct of the metal edge hit its target in the heart a shot rang out and Twilight jumped out of the way, as she looked at the fallen human on the ground dead Rodrigo walked over towards the body and retrieved his sword and proceeded to walk over to Twilight and spoke to her,

"sorry about that I must of missed one........".

After that statement Rodrigo fell flat on his face Twilight jumped in fear and started to levitate Rodrigo and she saw something that disturbed her that the shot she heard early on hit its mark through Rodrigo's belly which his white tee was staining with red blood and forming more by the second. Twilight cast a healing spell it worked and stopped the bleeding but it was not enough she levitated the limp body of Rodrigo on her back and rushed towards Ponyville and to the hospital to get proper care for the stranger,

"I hope my magic will be enough to save him."

Twilight worried, at first Twilight thought of teleporting herself and Rodrigo to the hospital but went against it because the magic spell will kill him at this state right now. As the dust and dirt picked up as she rushed to the hospital with her passenger Twilight noticed his breathing is shallow and labored and she thought to herself,

"I need to know more about you, If you die then im stuck with more questions about you. Please be alive when i get you to the hospital, I want to know more about you Rodrigo and what’s going on that will affect all of us in Equestria."

As she finished her thought she continued to gallop very rapidly towards the hospital.

Well this is my first chapter I want to everybody to read and review and I love straight foward and honest critiques is to improve my writing skills as I say again if you want my OC please PM me and I would love to hear your ideas about Rodrigo and give some insight and background on him so enjoy and chapter 2 is on the next rotation soon.

Comments

[Symphony]

This is almost painful to read, I'm afraid.

1. Needs more punctuation and indenting. One huge wall of text is not pleasant to read or attracting.
2. Please, please, please don't place a note right in the middle of the text.
3. Look for a pre-reade or an editor of some sort.

Other than that, I can say that this would be an interesting read. Keep it up and don't give up. You'll get the hang of it, promise.

[Cerberusx]

Where did you find that awesome cover picture for the fanfic.

[roman117]

DEAR GOD MAN USE PERIODS AND COMMAS

[ShiningShadow1965]

It's this program cannot upload it like in fanfiction.net there its more easier here they dont have that option. i got this all set up on my phone better is on word and everything is much more simple, can anypony help me on this the up load is google which i dont care for. For that its makes everything all wonky and i have to work on it to make it right and i dont need to do that I did it on microsoft word is there a way to just uploaded it without me copy and pasting that drives me up the wall.

[ShiningShadow1965]

I found it on the bing search engine cerebusx.

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[lupin the vapour]

You seriously don't like copying and pasting your own stuff into a different window? Uploading a file is completely pointless if you can just do that.

[ShiningShadow1965]

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its because every time i copy and paste i dont have the resources to do that the only resources is the library and that window is rarely open. thats why i have it on my phone all ready to up load immediately and i dont have these copy and pasting on this laptop the word program is not registered and no product code to use sucks, and here i am im just here to upload my stuff simple and get on to other things like writing chapter 5 co-authoring another story etc., etc. Actually the thing is to me i could do that in seconds and go on while copying pasting and fixing it to my liking extra steps i dont need everything is already conveyed in my story in word the bolding the centering everything so another word waste more time fixing these again? that to me dont make sense at all.