A member of the royal guard fights to protect the honor of the princess. Such loyalty can come with a price.
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Ahh, an adaptation of the sniper.
Different, yet well adapted.
Up vote and favorite for one of my favorite short stories.
4768988 Glad you recognized it. The Sniper is one of my favourites too, adapting it was a bit tricky at first but I managed. Thanks for the up vote and favourite.
"War. Pitting brother against brother, to the death. For what? Changes that don't matter? Changes that'll never come? Loyalty to a ruler or to themselves? Are any of these worth killing another? Killing a stranger, not knowing who they are, until far too late is there realization? War. Death to those who, not long ago, inspired you and many others, to the life they lead now."
Aww. When I read the title I thought it had something to do with Dark Souls, (Ceaseless Discharge).
Ahem. Anyway, this was a nice fic. I did notice the use of the word "began" where it wasn't necessary ("The unicorn began shaking"; why didn't he just shake?), and a few paragraph spacing issues, but other than that, I saw no problems. I liked the foreshadowing of how the unicorn had joined because of his brother, which I only noticed in my second readthrough of this fic. Nice.
You get an upvote.
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Apologies for the misleading title and any following disappointment although it is good to know you enjoyed the story regardless.
Much gratitude for pointing out my errors, it should provide useful in any further editing.
It is pleasing to see you take notice of the literary devices, at least I know someone recognized them.
The up vote is also quite gratifying.