She dreampt of flying every night, up above in the dark of the sky. Not content to sit idly by, she took the initiative. And where once she lived as the lonely unicorn with the broken horn and the faulty magic, she ascended. And she became as them, the ones who fly. She became a pegasus, flying on wings of brightest steel.
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Not bad.
this reminds me of that Hebrew Brony song I once heard.
Gotta say I enjoyed this
Well worth the wait when you told me you posted this last night
Hopefully you write more, I wouldn't mind learning a bit more about Dusk Breeze
You have earned my thumbs my fellow writer! Great work! I really feel for this unicorn with the broken horn. Dusk Breeze huh. Like this guy above me said, I'd really like to hear more about her and her past! Why is her horn broken? Does she have anypony looking after her? Has her lack of magic made her an outcast from other unicorns? And your writing style is incredibly fluid and just beautiful!
CELESTIA DAMMIT!!! Why can't I write like that! Calm down Silver. Let the LOLuna soothe you. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png Anyway, favoriting this!
Stay frosty my delicious friends. Silver, out!
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Woah bro. Woah. I didn't realize people were actually interested in this silly little story. D:
But I'm glad you like it thus far! I've sort of relegated it to the backburner for now in favour of working on my novel and another fanfiction, but I do enjoy the character of Dusk Breeze so I'll be sure to add more to this as time goes on.
Also for the record, Beta is my boyfriend, so you'll probably see his characters in my story and vice versa. :D
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Yeah, I know. I somehow stumbled upon his story a little while after reading this, and saw Dusk Breeze was in his story. Also, what is your other fanfiction about? Is it here on fimfiction or someplace else? And what's your novel about? I'm currently working on a novel series about an outcast from a universe that helps keep this one in balance.
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Well the other fanfiction is Metroid based. It's over on fanfiction.net if you're at all interested in the Metroid series! There should be a link over there on my profile, but if not take a wild guess at what my username is. :P
AS FOR MY NOVEL. It's about aliens and space and corrupt governments and mutants and pain and sorrow. Lots of sad stuff and pain. I hope to get it published one of these days but for now it exists solely on my laptop.
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Not to be rude, but to quote Discord, "UGH! Gag." dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png Sorry, but aliens and corrupt governments! That is oh so overused! However, if you can make it original and AWESOME, I'll take back this statement. Sorry about the rudeness.
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Not rude at all, your opinions are just as valid as everyone else's. c:
Well I've been working on it for like, upwards of five years now. The plot keeps changing. The ideas are certainly cliche, but I'm hoping the characters and situations are believable and original enough to warrant at least some interest. Either way. Either way. c:
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I know the feeling of a changing plot! I have a whole file on my computer that's I don't know how many pages long about a story I once thought I could publish! It's about this criminal who was on his way to prison on a ship, when the ship gets destroyed and he gets stranded on a deserted island. I've basically abandoned trying to make it follow the original plot. It's more my dump for random ideas now. Why you ask? Well, let me put it this way. The island now has steampunk automatons, time travel, and frikkin gods from various cultures. That's how screwed it got. It still serves as a great creative outlet though!
Ha!
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Are you kidding that sounds like an awesome creative outlet. :D
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It doesn't make much sense now though. Ah well. Everypony needs something to let creativity flow. Also, if it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you maybe check out my stories here on fimfiction and maybe leave some feedback? I'd really appreciate it!
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Certainly! I can't really do much reading right now due simply to circumstance but I'll check out your stuff in the coming days. c:
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Thanks a million! I really appreciate it! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/yay_red.png
You updated!
Gotta admit, this chapter was really well written, just like the last
I hope to see more chapters up sometime in the future
Speaking of which, I should also work on my fiction >.>
This gon' be good.