Appledisiac
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But then if that's the result of the apples, how did it result the way it did with Diamond Tiara?
504771 she only loves herself, she's a selfish horrible person and that selfishness (along with the overdose of the apple juice) caused an implosion of sorts... She didn't jump on Pip cause she didn't really love him, it was all a ruse to make Applebloom miserable. Applejack at least had someone in mind when she took them, and she desperately wanted to be with that person, although they weren't there at the time, so she wasn't getting the connection to them that the apples were trying to establish.
keep up the good work
This story is strange, but for some reason I continue reading whenever there is an update. Keep up the good work sir.
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Thank you!
Yay! Moral Support!
yer tales be very entertaining during my long treks at sea yar har
YOU GET A GOLD STAR!
(Ahem, a favorite)
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you want a regular apple or one of these apples?
This story confuses me. The first chapter was a bit of a turn off, but I like where the last two are going. I think I'll keep up with it.
For science.
675337 Yeah... I'm not too proud about the first chapter... Not sure how to really 'fix' it...
677282 To be honest, I'm not sure it needs fixing as such. It does provide a context and background which helps the rest of the story. So it works, -ish, but only with the rest, so many won't get that far is all...
Dunno, it's a tough one.
678995 Exactly, the context is brought out well, but the delivery is kinda... forced maybe? Maybe just not done well enough?... I dunno...
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Y'know i kinda started this as a joke to be honest... "Hey i'm gonna write a really bad clop fic, tee hee." But after chapter one i wanted to continue it... and it slowly became a lot more romantic... with a lot of sex as well *cough* So uh...yeah. It kinda is that.... but at the same time it starts off with clop so i might as well continue the course, hehe
I must admit, the takeoff on this was rather rough but the flights going good now... I think I'll just head back to my seat and enjoy this one. Keep it up.
I really, really hope this hasn't been abandoned.
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Kinda was... havent been around FIMfiction for a long time... dont know if i'll ever continue it or not... heck, aside from like... "It makes people want sex, AJ eats one and so does Diamond Tiara' i dont remember much about how this went...
But maybe i will... we'll see...