(This was a story a started a long time ago, but never got around to finishing. I lost interest because i was beginning to worry about my own gruesome thoughts. i came back to it thinking i could at least post what i had and see what others thought. it's not incredibly gory, but enough so to make your stomach churn as you get engrossed in it's mystery...If it gets enough attention i may continue it)
Gilda returns to Ponyville and causes another small ruckus, only to be found dead moments later. it's up to Twilgiht to find the murderer and keep Rainbow Dash from recieving the blame. but before she can, more murders occur, and more of her friends get fingered... can she stop this before the main six get thrown in jail?
Chapters (4)
A good start, I sure wanna read more of this murder mystery
You have to continue this story
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Dont worry =3 I have about 3-ish chapter already written, i just wanted to see if this got any interest attached to it...
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Wohooo
...more please
Yeah I should read it before I ask for more but Im just so into this story, wonder wonder who it could be
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If you could guess i'll give you a cookie
Loved it but...
Wow wow wow! You simply can not post only part of a story. Think about your dear readers, they'll perish of sadness if they do not find out what happens. Think if the readers!
Continue or not (I haven't read it), you need to fix your grammar hardcore.
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you can't just murder colorful ponies without thinking things through...
I'm working on it!
Two murders happened in the library while sweetie managed to hide. My question is, how did they get in? Twilight left the place to go save Trixie knowing Spike was still at home. She didn't lock the door? Spike didn't hear anything going on downstairs throughout the whole ordeal? There are a few holes here that need to be plugged up.
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hm, you make a good point... but... actually that doesnt affect the story at all... i'll bring the thought up later, but still... this actually works to my advantage... mwaha...
I can't wait for more
I'd say the murderer is Fluttershy, but that is a little to obvious.
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Maybe..... maybe not... There will be more hints in the next chapter... just need to re-read it and check it...
Hmmmmm I think I need to think like Edgeworth right now
Killing ponies that were threats but had to be powerful enough to trump unicorns and a griffon
Attempted murder on princesses by the cupcakes
Main 6 taken into custody
Trixie unprotected all day and could be considered a target
Either 2 things are happening
1) one unknown killer is on the loose with magic (unicorn) who could use magic to beat a griffon and 2 unicorns with magic (considering the positions of death) and Is framing others to cause the guard to chase shadows so they can murder more
2) all suspected this far (besides twilight) are actually murderers and are coordinating murders to eliminate any they considered evil or did not like (rarity hated snips amd snails, RD hates gilda, pinkie hates princesses?)
But the former is more logical but cant rule out the latter
More chapters please