I do not question how she found me, nor how she found her way into this cess pool of taint. I do not question why she follows me around, nor why she she seems to want something from me. She is here, and that fact is as unchanging as the fact the sun rises in the morning.
I am a gun for hire, a pony who is used to living on the side where there is no white. Instead, there is gray, and black.
There are no heroes in this story.
Doesn't really grab you like a first chapter should, left me indifferent.
It was alright but it didn't really get me as interested as a good first chapter should. I'll waitfor a few more chapters before I decide if it's good or not.
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Damn, I was trying a new style but I guess it didn't work.
love this
Sweetie Belle is grey. Did she like dye her coat?
4682498 She's cream, you know a fancy way of saying white?
4684794 No Rarity is white, sweetie belle is light grey. A more accurate representation of a cream colored coat would be apple bloom.
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Huh, you're right. My bad.
4688952 I got really angry when I learned that Sweetie Belle was gray.
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Oh well, she's cute, no matter what color she is.
10/10
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love this need more
It produced an eeree green flame.
1. Eerie.
At the front stood two guards, there merely for show than anything else
1. They're.
and her fur brisled in the chill
1. Bristled.
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Aha, I was wondering if you were gonna get to it.
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No it's There
They sit there merely for show
Y-You’re wings
1. Your.
5072745 True enough that it works that way as well.
Now I'm going to have to stew over this carefully. Who knows who she could be.
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I wonder who that is.
Nope.