A little blue foal is born to the perfect family and every one in the river village is happy. The foal is a playful, Upbeat little one. They will have much adventures.
I used to live in orphanage for unwanted kids, it was on and off, the foster parent's never wanted me. I never gotto make friends because of this. I got adopted & 1 of my brothers gone. Lifes great.
A little blue foal is born to the perfect family and every one in the river village is happy. The foal is a playful, Upbeat little one. They will have much adventures.
I don't think it's boring, but you could really use a proofreader
thanks, and id get one, but i dont know how that works
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4690976 you just ask around for an editor/proofreader. If you want, I can proofread for you, but it could take me a while as I have a bunch of stories to finish editing first.