Hi there im Gwen, I am a TG Professional Author Who loves mlp and clop fics
Big Macintosh Rarity Twilight Pinkie Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash are taken on a life changing tour of a new museum in ponyville by a very eccentric and passionate pony. and in the process learn that just because something seems odd on the outside if you look hard enough you can find something to enjoy in almost everything.
This fic contains Adult foal play.
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Do not tell me how to Write. I am a Published author and therefore Know how its done
I liked it. But it's rather short. If only were so easy in real life to get real friends to accept it like this.
Interesting.
I saw this story pop up in the diaper story groups and decided to come back to see it's overall reception.
Imagine my surprise when I found my old comment deleted. I'm not angered by this because it's not my story page, more so disappointed. My comment was in no way provoking negative feedback and was only providing constructive criticism to improve your story.
Deleting that comment and a few others who were trying to help, tells me a lot about you as an author.
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I am only deleting comments that are being disrespectful and telling me how to do my job no more and no less criticism is fine but don't be rude or proceed to tell a professional how to do there job.
4673947 *it's*
*sees all the deleted comments*
conclusion..will not read story
4679259 being a published author isn't everything
My first story was completely shit because it had NO PLOT WHATSOEVER but it got through because it had more or less good punctuation and structure NOT TO SAY YOU DON'T you do need to work on your endings
This is not rude criticism
And anyone who reads it before you delete it will say that
4679259 But even terry pratchet has proof readers and editors and receives feedback from his fans heck there isn't and never will be an author who is above criticism.
I mean it comes down to the simple fact were all human, we all make mistakes.
People are just trying to help friend
I really liked this story, thought the ending was kinda weird and a bit tacked on but it was a fun read. I think it would of made more sense if it was in a bigger city than ponyville.
I'm glad you saw reason