Oh, dear Rarity the Charlatan has been away for a week from the whimsical Twilight Sparkle. Watch, or rather read, as they meet again for... breakfast? If it's breakfast, then why do they only have tea? Why did my professor say "10/10, would read again" after it was graded & returned as such? Find out? ... Really, this is a redundant description, I'm just having fun.
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Well, that was pointless. Amusing and well written, granted, but pointless. Oh, well, it's eared its first like none the less
Cute scene. Some of the words in here seem a bit misused (too much thesaurus?) but it really has good tone and a feel of a short story.
wizardly -> magically?
Twi repeats "smart" a lot in that one paragraph, probably too much.
Hehe, this was deliciously painful to read. The non-content was screaming at me the entire time. Yet still I had to keep reading, I guess because it was an... experience. It's an alternative way of storytelling, and I guess that makes it worth the read.
For the Emperor!
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I know what you mean! This was written as a prompt for "what does "Smart" mean to you?" in an English class. Stretching my legs, I guess, preparing to maybe write something that actually has a point.
Oh and thanks for reading everypony
i wish i could wizardly do things :P
434861 If it is as well written as this, I'd love to read it.
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Thanks!
I actually just wrote a "character demo". I'm trying my best to make a good OC Pony, much less a story for him to star in--that comes later. I also used this little tidbit of a story as a "character demo" for how I interpret Rarity and Twilight, and dialogue between them.
436935 If it helps any, I thought that the characterizations in this were spot on. I'd be pleased to look at those "character demos" even if OC's aren't my particular cup of tea.
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