First Impressions are Misleading

by Luyten

Chapter Four: Epilogue

Author's Note:

Small chapter i know but i wrote it to finish this and not leave you guys hanging

hush about rushed endings and all that jazz. I have no idea what you're talking about.

Shhh.

have some cookies or tea. biscuits are good.

pillows.

V: Epilogue (one year later)

It was autumn. The trees were ablaze in color, and the last dregs of a warm summer's breeze gently transitioned into a cooler, milder zephyr. Ponies were playing in the parks, relaxing by a fire, and preparing for Nightmare Night, a changeling's favorite holiday (besides Hearts and Hooves Day).

Exactly one year ago, the total permanent population of changelings in Equestria was a staggering zero. Today, there are two thousand seven hundred and forty-two changelings coexisting with the Equestrians, myself included. It was quite stunning actually, to see how smoothly ponies accepted the new changelings into their society. It was a promise of hope, a new relationship, and of the past being forgotten. It was the start of something new, something that could be great—was great.

As it turned out, having changelings embedded in Equestrian industry caused there to be a massive increase in revenue and trade.

All in all, it was everything I always wished for: peaceful relations with Equestria, and a special somepony to share it with.

The End

Comments

[Luyten]

omg i need one more word! (at 5,099)

[Yonah21]

5108023 A bit of editing will fix that easy.

[Dream Seeker]

5108023 The 'Final' End would do it. Would have, at least.

[Luyten]

4976600 hell yeah

[Cavenerd20]

You didn't rush the ending, you rushed the whole story. That said, it's not a bad little tale. Just, try to be a little more thorough next time? Take a little time to flesh the story out, rather than have it be so skeletal.

[Luyten]

5814795 whoops. Sorry bout that :/

[Raven Flight]

I agree with 5814795; great premise, no meat. Thanks for sharing it anyway!

[hive vs machine]

hello 6115728 I suggest you do a reboot In the future to see how much experience you have gained
3 years have passed So you should have gained experience
6454221
5814795
What do you guys think

[Luyten]

8191587 thanks for the kind words! I might do one eventually, but I'll be gone all summer so :/

I'll try to do one when college starts!

[hive vs machine]

8191604 ok