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Y1


A writer of primarily dark fics, who lives in Australia and hopes to become a published author. Current main project is Conviction, one of the sweetest little stories ever written.

Comments ( 24 )

:pinkiehappy:Guess what I found? An awesome story!

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I don't think it counts as being found if you knew it was here. Thanks for the fav and watch by the way.

Umm, there's been no mention of Cutie Marks, so are they still the Cutie Mark Crusaders?:applecry::scootangel::unsuresweetie:

Y1

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Cutie marks are there, in fact I think I mentioned them while Kain was in hospital the second time. But the thing is they're on the right of your thigh so unless you're all but naked no one's going to see it.
Thanks for your question, I'll bring it up in future chapters.

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Er... I'm not sure what to make of that comment.
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Um... thanks... I think?

This story is entertaining i say go on

Y1

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I take it that you haven't read all of it then.

771897
Come on, the fic isn't that bad, it's just the opening chapters are crap. Fix those up and you'll probably get some extra views. But nonetheless, this means more time for you to work on that oneshot so hop to it!

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771961
It's not about it being bad it's about it being not being invigorating for me anymore.
And the oneshot's coming along nicely so that will hopefully be out sometime in the next two weeks or so. To be honest thought it's probably not what you're expecting.

771897 no I'm still reading its very good so far but who would hit fluttershy

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A prick named Kain. I wanted to get across just how much of an asshole Kain really is with that scene.

771977
Yeah, I can understand that, was just commenting on the fact as to why you had limited readers was all.

Haha that was sweet god I miss meat

Hahahaha I may be a sick bastard but I find that she killed Braeburn is hilarious

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772128
Certainly not the reaction I was going for but glad you enjoyed it.

Do not discontinue this story if you do I will get very upset and you wouldn't really like that would you this story is so damn good I haven't read a story this good in awhile and you've wrote so much why just throw away the story if you throw away something that was really good it's just stupid but alas I'm not the author you are and I hope I at least got through and gave you a message somehow

Plus if you discontinue this story because lack of views it kinda makes you sound like a prick

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I'm sorry to upset you but I've basically run out of inspiration for this story. When I started writing it I literally started writing it as a simple dumb action story with the intent of getting critique for my writing style and improving it. I never planned on it being much bigger than five chapters. Now that I've written some 75 thousands words and fifteen chapters for it I feel like this story is spiraling out of control and I'm only writing for it because I have to. To be honest the only character that I've written that I still feel inspired about is Gilda and even then she's not enough to prop the story up on her own.
It's not just lack of views but lack of interest from me as well. This story doesn't inspire me anymore.
The lack of planning in this had just made the whole darn thing a mess. I mean, I changed who the main character was about halfway through for Pete's sake! I never wanted to write a big story with complex characters or any of the stuff that might actually make a story good, I just wanted to improve my writing skills and I feel like I've done that. It's not throwing it away because as far as I'm concerned this story achieved more than I planned on doing anyway.
Now I've got three other stories that I'm working on all of which excite me much more than this that I've planned out properly and hopefully will be posted in the near future. Maybe you can enjoy those then.
I'm glad you enjoyed my story and I'm glad that you've tried to convince me to continue but as it stands this looks like it's headed for the bin. I'm sorry.

772188 well it was a good run it was a good story but.... I guess all good things must come to an end even if someone doesnt agree

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Now you're making me feel guilty.

772345 you shouldn't it's your decision

I has a sad now :fluttercry: , i actually like this story a lot. I love the idea of the brother's and the way you decided to develop the characters.

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