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ThePrinceOfTheNorth


I am Prince John Winter. Welcome to the Kingdom of Solstice.

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While fighting rebels, Captain Black Sky sustains and injury, causing him to lose his ability to fly. He ends up at the bottom of a deep chasm, and soon discovers he's not the only pony in it.

What is in the chasm? Is it friendly, or will it finish off Black Sky?

Read on, friend, and all shall be revealed.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

Very cool idea love it

4551326
Thanks!
It's basically a bit of backstory for the next chapter of Once Upon A December, but I also wanted to do something interesting for my birthday, so I did this!

I know this story has been done before.
Did you get any inspiration from another story?

so whens the next part chapter coming out and might i suggest getting someone to read this over cause i did notice a few mistakes in grammar thats just a tidbit of constructive critism i mean well when i say that and all in all it was awesome i do hope theres more

4553264
I think it was A Voice In The Dark...
Anyway, it's a ghost or something in that story, and the protagonist doesn't know it.
That story also takes place in pre-Equestrian times.

4553267
I was just doing it as a one-shot backstory for the next chapter of Once Upon A December, but I might consider making this into a full-fledged story. If you have any ideas, PM me.

4553382
Yep, that's the one, though I do not care for audiobooks at all.

4553493 I like this one:twilightsmile: it tingls my imagination, but what is a Thestral?:rainbowhuh:

5168569
Essentially a living skeletal pegasi. I made her an alicorn thestral instead.

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