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ThePrinceOfTheNorth


I am Prince John Winter. Welcome to the Kingdom of Solstice.

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Well, we all know what happened all those years ago, don't we? Luna became Nightmare Moon and fought Celestia, which killed her, but not before she sent Nightmare Moon TO the moon. Celestia was replaced by Crystalia, her best friend who also happened to be a Changeling, and she was Celestia until recent events caused her to be revealed. But recent events also revealed another thing, one that had supposedly been evil, and destroyed on the Day of the Summer Sun one thousand years after she'd been banished.

Recent events revealed Nightmare Moon, herald of the Eternal Night, was still alive and kicking, but not kicking the rumps of the Princesses, no. She was fighting in the name of the Princesses. What could cause such a change in such a cruel alicorn and, on another note, how was she still alive?

Read on, friend, and all shall be revealed.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 16 )

Reading that description makes me believe that this needs an alternate universe tag

Quite a bit of spelling mistakes but Idc I love this story

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You see, most of my other stories, Brighter Than The Sun being the exception, conform to a single, linear universe of my creation. I wouldn't go though all that trouble just to slap an alternate universe tag on something that conforms to every other story I've written.

4251860 That logic... is very lacking. It doesn't matter if it conforms or not to your stories, it matters whether or not it conforms to the main MLP canon.

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I think you need to check out what is consider alternate universe by the site's FAQ.

Here, I'll even show you.

i.imgur.com/yFDdutIh.jpg

Not to mention...that "effort" takes less than ten seconds...

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1. Nightmare Moon never won, but wasn't evil, either, so...
2. Solstice was concealed in the far north, but revealed itself...
3. Faust wasn't the only god to help create Equus...
4. There will be numerous chapters in Equestria and The Crystal Empire. This book is far from done.

On other hand, it did pass moderation...

I don't know. Let me think on this, and don't say 'there is only one answer' because the cliché that comes with that bores me silly when not used in a book or movie.

Just let me think.

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Mate, there's no way around it, this story is as AU as hell.

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*sigh*
The Prince yields. There is no reasonable point in continuing this discussion.

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It's not a big deal, just a minor gripe :pinkiehappy:

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I know, it's just that I'm very passionate about my work, as it means the world to me.
Writing and drawing are really two of a very few things I can be proud of myself for, the others being my friendly, accepting attitude towards others (usually) and my ability to play video games, which becomes boring very quickly.

Writing, reading and drawing (or creating pictures) are the only real constants.

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And there's nothing wrong with that, but critique must be accepted and ruminated upon for an author to progress in the field of literary excellence. After all, you're writing for an audience, and you must first find out what the audience wants if you wish to gain fame in the world of fan fiction.

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I'm afraid I haven't read the story yet, but one pointer I can give is longer chapters.

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