• Member Since 9th Sep, 2012
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Ractrin


Gamer, Author, Musician, Christian, and Brony

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Rainbow Dash takes Scootaloo to the doctor to see why she is having trouble flying, and the doctor gives her troubling news. Angered, Scootaloo sets out to prove him wrong. Inspirational short story.

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Damn, they're doubting me, there's only one possible thing to do in this situation... *jumps off a cliff* #logic

I think you mean "be able"...
Anyways, other than the occasional spelling error, this was a really sweet fic :)

Dude what the fuck is your avatar supposed to be? It scares the shit out of me.

Not bad, the poems or whatever they were could flow a bit better though.

You will never BEABLE to fly. What is beable?

it's just beatifuuuuul....i love the ending :heart: :fluttercry::fluttercry:

4524717 honestly, i really didn't dawn on me till after i wrote this, that she must've been really f-ed in the head to take this course of action. but then again, i was writing an emotional short, since when do logic and emotion coincide?


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4527732 i honestly dunno why Microsoft Works doesn't auto correct this...it never has and it's become a damn habit of mine to not place a space there because of it :flutterrage:


4524991 my avatar is a chibi version of a character from one of my stories. Into the Rainbow Factory explains that marginally.


4532199 thank you very much :pinkiehappy:

4533291 Microsoft Word :twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2:
Well, you can fix that by changing the settings on you autocorrect :P message back if you're not sure how :twilightsmile: and don't worry bout nickthebro, he just be a troller xD

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I prefer Works over Word. Word seems to....chaotic...Works seems to be laid out, least on the blank document, for just writing. and i know i can change the settings, just haven't taken the time.

4538202 Works? What's that? :P

Care to explain the "tragedy" tag?

4584069 Yeah, I wondered about this one too! I pluck up "tragedy" tags for, ya know, TRAGEDY. What's up with this?

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