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Ello! On this account, you will see mostly game shows written!

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[I have been given permission from JusSonic to use the same title] Welcome to Total Drama Equestria. Here, 22 ponies will be split into 2 teams, then they will compete in challenges, losing team votes a pony out. 11 campers=teams merge. The last pony standing will win TOTAL DRAMA EQUESTRIA!

THE HUMAN TAG IS ONLY FOR CHRIS AND CHEF, THE PONIES ARE STILL PONIES!!!!!

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[THIS IS NOT EASY, SEND ME MESSAGES OF IDEAS YOU GOT]

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 19 )

I remember this show when I was ten.

It was the first time I've ever seen cartoon barf.

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Still with me, even to this day...

4755303 they actually had blood in the newer season.

Please let me know if I should quit doing the dock of shame chapters or keep them up! :twilightsmile:

I can't help but feel as if there's something a bit lacking in your story. It's not your grammar or spelling, or anything of that sort. Don't take this to heart, but I feel like there is more talking than actual describing. I tend to over-explain things to an extreme, and I usually expect others to as well. (That's one of my problems.) Nonetheless, I really like TDI. I haven't finished the third season yet, though.

I'll favorite your story, sure.

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You can type
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to replace this. It's a lot cleaner looking.
Just get rid of the spaces in-between the brackets, and it'll look like this.


Just a tip.

4755402 Thanks for letting me know and the tips! I am welcome to all reviews! Good or bad! :)

4755409
I hope you can take my faulty critism and use it to help write future chapters. :3

4755415 I already used some of it in the first part of episode two :3

Buddy, you just became even more of a big pal for life. Nicely done! :rainbowdetermined2: :twilightsheepish: :ajsmug: :pinkiehappy: :raritywink:

4755450 I would not have made this if it went for you and your total drama! You are pretty much why I am writing this. Thanks for inspiring me! And just wait to see what I have in store for season two!

Poor Rarity. :raritycry: Yeah, I can imagine her doing this right now.

I can honestly say that this was a fun read.
Keep up the good work!

Team Victory/Screaming Gophers

If I could offer a little criticism couldn't you pick team names that have some similarities with each other, like being both animals? Also your making a lot of the ponies EVEN Fluttershy little harsh?

Just forget the dock of shame chapters. If you are keeping up with the story you don't really need them. But hey, it is up to you.

FYI I'm going to not type at all for the next few days due to cross country camp.

Here's a thought if you are stumped for ideas; Have Pinkie Pie and Pinkamena be like Mike and Mal from Total Drama All-Stars.

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*gives cookie* good idea.

NOTE Great news! Its back to work on Wednesday! The wait is soon to be over! Next chapter in one to two weeks!

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