Total Drama: Equestria!

by GameShowBrony

Dock of Shame #1

NOTE: A Dock of Shame chapter means that we go over the eliminated player's best and worst moments. The farther they go, the more moments they deserve. If you see this.

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That means a new moment. The chapter will begin with a quote that the player has said earlier in the competion. It will be totally random. If you still don't know what I am doing, here is an example.

I hope you understand! Let me know in the comments if I should keep this up or just do normal chapters! Happy reading!

An animation shows Rarity riding in the Boat of Losers away from the island.

Random Quote Rarity said: "Who NEEDS a million bits when you LOOK like a million bits?!"

START MUSIC

"This.... Is where I am staying...." *BLARGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG*

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"EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW"
"Rarity! Calm down! It's just log cabins!"
"Ahem, Twilight, darling, I can't sleep in this. It's too... Messy...."

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"Hmp, whatever. Oh, and Zecora, if you want to stay, please, cut the rhyming..."
"...."

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"Ummm... Chris, darling, I can not jump into that water.... My mane will get wet...."

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"What, who needs a million bits when you LOOK like a million bits!"

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The next scene shows Zecora walking over to Rarity on crutches and punching her.

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"Hmph. I am very dissapointed in all of you!"

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STOP MUSIC

Alright, two remain. Thunderlane and Rarity. The last cupcake goes toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo." Thunderlane was sweating, Rarity looked like she was about to throw up. "Thunderlane."

"YES!!!"

"WHAT! YOU VOTED THE BEST LOOKING MARE OFF?!"

"What can I say," said Thunderlane as he ate his cupcake, "You said you looked like a million bits, so why do you NEED a million bits!" Chef for some reason played the rim-shot.

"Well Rarity, its time for you to take the dock of shame, and ride off in the boat of losers."

"Alright, fine, but I will be back!"

"No you won't, you can't come back, EVER!" And with that, Rarity walked the dock of shame, trying not to cry, but when she climbed into the boat of losers, she started balling her eyes out, and with that, rode off into the darkness.

A picture comes up with all the contestants standing on a platform, and Rarity slowly fades from it.

Author's Note:

There you have it! Rarity, GONE! Who do you think is going home next? Remember, I draw from a hat for elimination order, so it is 100% fair! (And don't worry, the elimination order makes at least 96% sense) So, should I keep up with these dock of shame chapters, or forget about them? Comment below!

Comments

[Flying Fantasy Horse]

I remember this show when I was ten.

It was the first time I've ever seen cartoon barf.

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Still with me, even to this day...

[The Hood]

4755303 they actually had blood in the newer season.

[GameShowBrony]

Please let me know if I should quit doing the dock of shame chapters or keep them up!

[ChingKittyCat]

I can't help but feel as if there's something a bit lacking in your story. It's not your grammar or spelling, or anything of that sort. Don't take this to heart, but I feel like there is more talking than actual describing. I tend to over-explain things to an extreme, and I usually expect others to as well. (That's one of my problems.) Nonetheless, I really like TDI. I haven't finished the third season yet, though.

I'll favorite your story, sure.

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You can type
[ hr ]
to replace this. It's a lot cleaner looking.
Just get rid of the spaces in-between the brackets, and it'll look like this.

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Just a tip.

[GameShowBrony]

4755402 Thanks for letting me know and the tips! I am welcome to all reviews! Good or bad! :)

[ChingKittyCat]

4755409
I hope you can take my faulty critism and use it to help write future chapters. :3

[GameShowBrony]

4755415 I already used some of it in the first part of episode two :3

[GameShowBrony]

4755450 I would not have made this if it went for you and your total drama! You are pretty much why I am writing this. Thanks for inspiring me! And just wait to see what I have in store for season two!

[JusSonic]

Poor Rarity. Yeah, I can imagine her doing this right now.

[SpiderDungeon]

4755402
WHAAAAAT???

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woah...

[SmokeShadow95]

Just forget the dock of shame chapters. If you are keeping up with the story you don't really need them. But hey, it is up to you.

[GameShowBrony]

FYI I'm going to not type at all for the next few days due to cross country camp.

[Lunafanficsinc]

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