I am a writer, serial poet, etc., hoping to reach the high rank of, "serial writer."
Nerves shot in every foal;
Will they succeed, or take their toll?
Scootaloo has trained well;
She's destined to succeed;
But will she fail?
I can see goosebumps on your arms, indeed;
Ready for a scare?
Prepare to read.
Enjoy the
true
story, by me;
Wait and see;
The Factory.
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The original was by Auroradawn.
You ain't fooling anybody.
.....Dafuq is this? I could barely read this.
This wasn't at all funny, it was just God awful.
Never write fanfiction again
6/10 try harder
If this was a parody... then why didn't you mention it in the description? And if it was going to be this god awful, then why didn't you mention that in the description too?
I couldn't even finish this. And posting that it's the original? Have you lost your mind?
I'm going to laugh when Aurora Dawn kicks your ass for this.
First Fail: Saying this was the original. You should have said this was a parody.
Second Fail: There were quite a few grammar/spelling errors here.
Third Fail: It WASN'T FUNNY! This was just a bunch of random shit mashed together with the theme of Rainbow Factory mixed in!
Fourth Fail: The "romantic" relationship wasn't funny. In the slightest.
Fifth Fail: Overall, this was just one big fail. BTW I totally agree with everything 4496214, 4496179, 4496187 and 4496593 said.
Done.
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Ooooook.
Credit where it's due.
It was KIND of funny. But make it obvious it's a parody. Remove the tragedy tag, cuz it's not really sad. Remove THE ORIGINAL.
Good, and pretty long.
Just bad luck choosing a topi.
I only found it funny because I like random shit. Most people prefer AYLEAST SOME LOGICS IF YOU KNOWZ WHAT I MEANZ.
Get it?
4500915 Not a bit lazy. Just plain lazy. Yes, I went there; I put the word in italics.
The some goes like this
A rainbows tale isn't quite as nice, as the story we know of sugar and spice. A Rainbow's easy when you got to know, with the help of the magic of the pegusus DEVICE. Instermental. Let's Delve deeper into rainbow philosophy. Far beyond that of cloudsdales mythology. It's easy to misjudge that floating city. With its alluring decor and social psychology. But with all great things comes good respondsiblitiy. That of cloudsdale's weather stability. How do you ask are they up to the task to which the answer is in a simple facility. Instermental. In the rainbow factory were your fears and horrors come true In the rainbow factory were not a soul can get throughx2. Instermental. In the rainbow factory were your fears and horrors come true In the rainbow factory were not a soul can get through.
This was amusing enough for an upvote, but not enough for a fave.