While you are reading this, a skeleton could be dancing behind you
Twilight has fought many villains in the past.
Most of them, just for a day, terrorized all of Equestria and the world.
But this......
It ranges from an totally unknown backstory to advanced technology.
But his main difference is that he will kidnap, torture and kill if needed to.
Now only Twilight and her Friends who can save Equestria from the unknown.
Are they?
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You really need to consider getting someone to proofread/edit your work, though it would be a large task. There are many grammatical errors...however, I can see you have put a lot of effort into this story. Go read the writing guide on the site as well! I think it may be of great use to developing authors such as yourself!
Keep writing!
There a lot of effort into this story I can see that all you need is a little work on the proofread and editing,
Aside from the huge amount of grammar errors this story is pretty good.
🙍
I can't make anything out of this fic.