Follow the travels of Cleansing Flame, a unicorn pony with tragedy in his past. He decides to leave his life behind to travel Equestria and find himself. Every destination is a new opportunity, but what lies in these new places? Who will he meet and what will he learn? Will he find himself or end up going back to the life he discarded? The story will be done first person style. Starts 3 months after the end of Season 4. Thanks for reading
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I like this story so far keep it up!
4487571 Thanks.
.......I am not to sure about this story, that whole monster thing seems really off for me, and well some parts of this story seem to be pretty rushed.....
4506904 I see your point. I haven't written anything but essays for a while so my storytelling is a little rusty. Thanks for letting me know. I'll work on it
"A cleansing fire always burns little Mandus...but it purifies, and makes anew."
4520789 well played
Love it! Keep up the good work
The plams is strong in this story!
Wouldn't it be a Crystal Tree Castle if it's after Tirek?
4586155 you're right. I just went back and fixed that, hopefully I didn't miss any tree library spots
4581825 Plam? PLAM!? PLAAAMMM!?!?!?!?!?!?
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What's a Plam?
4586437 There's this youtube poop subculture who solely make edited videos of a certain English poet named Michael Rosen (he's my profile pic). A common phrase from his edited poem videos is: "when I was six I ate a bag of plums!" But with his cockney accent, it sounds like he's saying "plams".
The base use of the word has been the substitute for several different nouns in these youtube poop videos. Thus, I used "plams" as a substitute for "The Force". Very straightforward and logical (not).
From the title, I thought that the main character was some kind of exorcist, that cleanses unholy and haunted things with fire. Then I saw that the author's profile pic was of Moses and I lost it.
Now I'm reading this story all because of my stupid thought. 
Good job Author Fire_brand, here are some Sir Spikes for you. 
I apologize for the long delay for the next chapter. I have been unable to figure out how i wanted the next chapter to play out untill recently.
Wtf a simple mistake and he is instantly hated and gets his skull cracked wtf that is so stupid.
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I will admit that my storytelling wasnt very good when i started writing. But its not uncommon for ponies to have knee-jerk reactions, i just may have taken it too far in the early chapters
Nice
I just noticed. Like always, spike is left alone from every adventure. Poor guy.
Nice
You know what he should just leave ponyville at this point ponies are just assholes. Fucking AJ damn it.
See THAT, THAT is why I HATE the mane 6 they shove their muzzle in every bodies business.
I have one complaint this is supposed to be him writing in a journal you can not know how to pronounce a word and still spell it.
I just hope that Twilight will bring the hammer of Celestia down on those sick fucks after all if my OC was their he would have ripped out their souls and sent them straight to hell.
I just realized that Flame is a subconscious alcoholic.
but seriously he gets drunk every time he has cider.