fluttershy's freak out (literally)
"Im telling you guys, I found discord in the everfree and im not lying!"
Shouted an enraged Fluttershy at her friends.
the mane six stood in twilights library staring at fluttershy in disbelief,
"Maybey you've just mistaken him for one of your animals?" Said rainbow dash.
"No! I even brought him with me!" Said fluttershy as she poked her head out of the door, "Angel! Angel! Would you be a good boy and go get discord for me?" Angel left and then returned two minutes later struggling to drag something over to the door...It was discord!!
the four ponies gasped, twilight being in the other room then returned holding a plate of nachos in her magic,
"Hey girls I hope you dont mind I made na-" she then saw discord and dropped the plate.
"Girls get your elements!!" She said rushing over to the case in wich they were contained,"quick! Before he wakes up!!"
"Twilight wait! Hes injur-" she was cut off when she started to levitate along with the other elements.
"Hgnn... what ha-" discord had just awaken from his slumber when he saw twilights eyes start to glow white, "WAIT! NO, I... oh whats the use, they're not going to listen to me anyway..." he slouched In his bubble.
"TWILIGHT STOP!" Screamed fluttershy, making the elememts stop the procedure and falling to the floor
"He didnt do anything for bucks sake!!"
"Do anything...DO ANYTHING!!
HE MURDERED SPIKE FLUTTERSHY!!"
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4679572
well thats alot of fucks...
first off I understand if its hard to read but I cant do anything about your lack of glasses
and secondly im only ten and this is my first fanfiction so id apreaciate it if youd lay off of the language and maybe take a chill pill cuz...
like every other story on this website has the same size lettering so Im not sure if your just being a troll or if you need some freaking glasses,
either way,
I appreaciate your criticism.
Happy shipping
Since this is your first fan fic, I am not going to rude, and rather disgusting because I think it had a good plot. And it was decent. Some people just need to put there pony bone back in there pants, and realize that you didn't write this for them. Try adding a bit more detail and honestly, I like that your chapters are shorted then others, because I can read them quickly, and not have to rush, and be worried that I would have to leave in the middle of a chapter. SharkIsFab might need a personality make over, because that's not fab.
She may also be on her period.
4679629
using an over abundance of curse words indicates an absence of vocabulary
have a nice day
Yes another chapter!! You seriously made my day but oh the cliffhanger I can't beleive poor spikey Wikey is dead ): can't wait till the next chapter. hope there is some fluttershy / discord moments
Sorry I did not have your cover art. I never thought I'd be this busy. I bit off more than I can chew.
You see, I don't like complaining, but I've had a lot of work. I have band camp my whole summer, literally, with only a few weeks to help my mom, practice my music, and work on other things I have to do. It may not seem like much, but really, it is. I have two younger siblings that just seem to be tornadoes everywhere.
I have been meaning to get it done, but I can't seem to find the right time. If you don't want it anymore, just tell me. If you do, please respond quickly. I start Marching Camp next Monday. I will try at my most to have it done, promise. I'm not one to exactly follow promises, but I don't break them.
Have a goodnight. It's late now. Best be to sleep.
Again, sorry.
4843113
hey girl,
its okay!
people have lives outside of the internet and i get that.
TAKE YOUR TIME!
4877906 Aw! Thank you. <3 I will try to finish it as soon as possible. I don't want to let someone like you down. ^.^
Again, thank you, for being so considerate and understanding. May God bless your week. :3 (If you believe, that is. :P)
4881948
np!
4886435 I just need to color it now. ^.^
aw man whens the next chapter coming
4912319
i currently have a case of the terrible...
*writers block*...
4915044 day's ok you just have to think to yourself that all the haters that hate the world have to love something :)
5440466 sucks for them. :P