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Twilight Sparkle has read tons of stories, but they have always been fictional. After she comes into possession of the manuscript for a story called "Departure," a simple search for the author quickly becomes a fight for survival. A dark presence engulfs Ponyville, much like what happens in the story. Ponies touched by this dark presence become Taken - murderous, shadow-veiled shells of their former selves. It is up to Twilight and her friends, along with the help of an original character, to utilize the power of light and fight off the Dark Presence.

This is a crossover between MLP: FiM and Alan Wake.

WARNING: This story may come off as confusing to the untrained reader, as the chapters tend to progress out of order. It's a technique very similar to what authors like William Faulkner used. If you do not understand something, your question will most likely be answered in a later chapter. If not, I will try my best to answer questions in the comments.

This is also my first real fan-fiction, so suggestions as to how I can improve are always welcome, but I would prefer thoughtful criticism as opposed to flaming or other...over-dramatic responses.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 18 )

holy shit, an Alan wake cross over!

-must read

^^What he said! This is fantastic! If you stop writing this I WILL kill you.:ajbemused:
For reals though, this is a great story.

*cough*Creeping Darkness*cough**cough*PenStroke*cough**cough*

427227 To be honest, I really didn't know that there was another Alan Wake crossover out there. It was probably because it is on Google Docs rather than this site. :twilightoops:

longer chapters, maybe? either way, i'm very interested. go on.

Surweet. Dead Ponies=Awesome just waiting to happen.:pinkiecrazy:

Another Alan Wake cross? Well Creeping Darkness set the bar pretty high...

I take back my previous "Bueno". You have earned a loud YES!!!YESS!!

And this is why I shouldn't go away for so long.

One of the best story's I have ever read...ever (and I have read a lot of things 0_0).

Nice chapter. RD? And what program do you use for the modeling?

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First off, about RD. Technically, she does not have a specific place in the story just yet. She was in chapter 5, as you know, but chapter 5 was just a dream sequence; so, technically, the events of that chapter did not actually happen.
Regarding the modeling: I use a game called "Garry's Mod" (or "Gmod") to model. If you want to learn more about it, where to buy, etc., you can find all of the information at The Gmod homepage. Also, I will keep some Gmod-related content in my blog, and you can always check my deviantART page for more examples of my work.

428414 Creeping darkness is now on fimfiction.net :D read it its very good!

You really should have something besides dialogue. For all we readers know, Twilight and Postal Code are talking at the bottom of a lake, able to breathe due to a spell Twilight cast.

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