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Nightmare Moon's Triumph

A different take on the episodes Friendship is Magic Parts 1 and 2

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Elric of Melnipony

Elric of Melnipony #1 · Jun 2nd, 2014 · · ·

This isn't a movie script. There needs to be more to your transitions than just telling us the name of a new location, like "Everfree Castle" or "Ponyville".

AortaHeartless

AortaHeartless #2 · Jun 2nd, 2014 · · ·

4484379 Thank you for your suggest,. It always helps.

StormLuna

StormLuna #3 · Feb 4th, 2015 · · ·

Well this is something. I would suggest reading other stories to get an idea of how to work with transitions. I did upvote this though because I like Nightmare Moon.

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