The Cutie Mark Crusaders have tried hundreds of ideas to gain their cutie marks. When "crocodile catcher" doesn't work out, they decide to invade Twilight Sparkle's library to see if they can find another spell to help them. What they discover is more than what they bargained for.
In place of their cutie marks, they lose their families instead.
With the aid of Princess Luna, the Cutie Mark Crusaders have to find a way to break the curse so they can bring normality back to Ponyville. But this won't just be a quest of mind. It'll be a quest of heart and soul that will make the Cutie Mark Crusaders really see who they are on the inside.
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This is a collaborative story between SilverMuse and the amazing kbooms. Be sure to check out his page and his awesome stories!!
Seems interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter.
this is going to continue?
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Yes, it's still in the works. We have a couple of chapters done, but we're working on revising them right now.
Awww, this was so cute!
But...is this the ending?
Isn't there any sequels?
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There are more chapters, don't worry :-) we're waiting to post more until we complete a few more chapters.
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Yay!
This story is simply adorable, i especially liked the part about how Scootaloo is doing chores and stuff, because it makes much sense.Even though they don't have anything about it in the show.
And you got the personalities right too!
Really?!
The only two remarks i honestly have about this story(, and please don't take it negative but as constructive criticism because i don't mean to be mean
,) The first thing is that i find it honestly really unprobably that Applejack would call Applebloom AB, but this is just what i personally think.
The other thing is when they are eating dinner and AJ says something like "see Big Mac, our little filly is growing up" I don't know if you have any siblings, but i have 3 one sister and two brothers, and this would be awkward as HELL to say to a brother
Else than these small two things, i love this story so far!
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Haha, never worry about providing helpful critique. It helps us all grow as writers. We appreciate the feedback!