5598159 Ah! Yeah, I'll fix that. Thanks for pointing it out! And I suppose this story isn't for everyone, as well as the characters may not seem as flushed out yet. They will most definitely become more apparent as the story goes. This is my first real story that I've stuck with, and as anyone else, I am learning. If you think it may be a story you could come to like for even a small chance, please give it a chance to grow. :) thanks for your input. I value other's opinions!

You haven't up dated this story in a while. I hope it hasn't grown cold over time.

This is Blazing Light, by the way.