I Like where this is going so far!

4387655 Glad to hear it!

Gonna need a new arm now. :P

this is really interessting, after i get through the whole chapter. I would prefer it a bit shorter or at least, well this could be two chapters already i think. It is to long for a quick reading from time to time.

PS: Now i want, that Ami or Amethyst killed them all. The only one i somehow like is the armored mand Jareb, probably because of his name and because he say so less, and well for a few minutes the boss seems a bit caring.
They maybe believe that is the right thing to do, but they seems to be the bad guys later. Maybe it would be revealed, that they don´t did anything in the past, but right now it looks like they want revenge.

Well i like it but it is to long and i had to read the whole thing befor i could decide that i really liked the idea.

4593342 Thank you for reading, and i'm glad that you like it. I realize this chapter was a tad long, but it was more of a prologue to set the stage. Rest assured that most chapters won't be this long at all.