• Published 6th May 2014
  • 401 Views, 18 Comments

Before I Die... - themouthofmush



"Before I die, I want to..." A stallion contemplates his answer to the statement that was written on the side of a wall.

  • ...
0
 18
 401

Explanations (Purely Optional)

So, if you are reading this, I’m guessing you read the actual story. What this will be as just an explanation of how this story came about.

You see, the whole “Before I Die” wall thing is an actual thing and it is done pretty much as it was described in the fic. People just go up to a wall, either on the side of a building or on some flat wooden planks, and use chalk to write something down. They could be serious, silly, aspirations, dreams, goals...whatever.

Now, the idea of the fic come about just like how the beginning of the story did. I never really thought about stuff like that before, but it really seemed like an enjoyable thing to watch. A few of my friends said that they put some stuff on the wall and that they enjoyed doing it, for whatever reason I do not know.

The more I thought about the whole wall thing, the more I got curious about it. So, doing what I do way too often, I “researched” the idea about the wall via the interwebs. I found the actual official site about it and decided to see how it started out and spread. Needless to say, I was amazed. The person in charge, can’t remember her name for the love of me, started out by just writing on a blank side of an old wall and leaving it to the public and loved the turnabout of what happened. Since then, it has gone to a lot of different cities and it even has been translated to a few different languages.

The more and more I thought about it, the more the idea of the story happened.

While ‘working’ on it, I figured out that it would be interesting to challenge myself with the first-person-isc feel of it. Random start and roughly four weeks later and here we are, reading the explanation for the understanding of the story and yes, I know that that was poor sentence structure but shush.

Oh, one more thing. The reason why I ended it the way that I ended it is because…well, truth be told, I couldn’t think of any other way to do it. And yes, the stallion did, in fact, write something down on the wall. What it was is up to all of you to figure out. Yep, I’m going there.

Comments ( 16 )

This was good. :twilightsmile: I enjoyed it.
"Before I Die, I want to ___" That is a very deep question, if you think about it.

4344647
thank you for the feedback. i wasn't sure how well it would do, considering i'm not good at the whole monologue type of writing :twilightsheepish:.

Wow.
This story wasn't feelsy, sexy, sad, angering, or any of those things....but it still struck a chord with me.
What I would write?
Cliche as it is,
"Go to Equestria."
Good story man!
You got my seal of approval,
~ TOOWC

4345716
coolio, my fine fellow....or madam. your picture isn't helping me out with the gender specific wordage. it's good to see that my first attempt at something like that struck you as much as you said. the seal of approval is a plus as well.

4345927 I'm a guy.
The profile pic, now that's a story for another time.
But yeah, I really did like your story, and now I'm even more impessed, seeing as it was your first!
Keep up the good work,
~ TOOWC

4346149
okay then dude.
the praise....it's too much for me.

4346155 Nope.
More praise needed.
ACCESSING PRAISE RECEPTACLES.....
REMAINING PRAISE IS IDIOTIC.
USE PRAISE Y/N?
Y
USING PRAISE...

OMG I LUV UR STORY
SO GUD I CRID
OMIGOD U R SO GRET
I NEED MOAR
I LUV U AND YUR STORY

NO PRAISE REMAINING...
PLEASE ACCEPT THIS SPIKESTACHE AS COMPENSATION
:moustache:

....Sorry.
I got a bit stupid there.
It's your fault any way with your great story.

4346179
:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
yes, the three faces are indeed needed. especially since what you just wrote.

4346192 No problem here.
I never hate on a laughing RD face.

4346149 That profile pic is definitely some of DimWitDog's finest stuff am I right? :raritywink:

I read this, but strangely I never reviewed it.

It's very interesting. :pinkiesmile:

4754004
thank you. like i explained in the explanation, it was floating in my head for a while and i decided to finally do something and then this happened.

5798879
wow, just wow. i think that's more praise than i deserve for this. seriously, i'm grateful, but a lot of praise.

7517254 okay, T.S. Elliot, really? no way i'm comparable to him.

Login or register to comment