Amazing! Simply amaazing!!

Yay they are a happy couple... So far

I love it want more

That was a very cute scene and felt like a good follow up from all the emotional sub plots as well as addressing the main plot. It also leaves the reader guessing about what will come next for the cute couple. I really like how you had Luna shrink herself down instead of making him bigger. It shows she'd be willing to go to his level rather than constantly raising him up to hers.

I think my only criticism is tat you made the chapter so short. I was super excited to see this updated, only to find it was less than half the size of most chapters.

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter you send our way, well done.

You got a few typos in there. This was a great, albeit short addition to the story.

Nice. You're missing some italics there in the middle, by the way, I could see the broken formatting.

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Yeah, it was a bit short. I had a bit of a block, so I thought it best to just publish what I had so I could get on to thinking about further chapters.

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Thanks for the heads up. I couldn't get my usual pre-reader to read it, so that slipped through. Fixed now!

Please MOAR!

And I happen to be a fan of really big princesses with smaller stallion escorts. Regardless, you've got a real sweetheart of a Luna character there, and she is very enjoyable to read about.

This is good stuff I mean it is not the best romance I had read but i think it is the best lunafic I have ever read :D

D'aaawww, Luna is so sweet.

Update?

is this story dead? it appears so