• Member Since 30th Aug, 2012
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Lucien Chance


heads under our beds

Comments ( 30 )

I liked it! Good ol' vanilla even if a somewhat pale OC in terms of personality beyond that outburst after the game.

*sigh* the things i read because of awesome author...

in all seriousness, it was kinda decent, kinda... i dont feel like giving a review for a clop story however so.....
the reasoning for luna felt a bit weak, the video game section were really well written and i cant think of a third thing to say so i can make a goddamit me joke. it was a decent read.

3381834 when i was browsing through the latest stories thing this was not what i expectected to come across sandcroft... Great Job:twilightsmile:

Chaotic you lucky sum bitch~:rainbowwild:

Nice story, quick note though "Hot ropes of his gooey seed flooded her insides, causing her to moan in greater pleasure at the feeling of being filled up by another stallion." I think that "Another stallion" suggests that Luna is a stallion or has been filled up by a different stallion just before this. And I don't think that's the case now is it :ajsmug:

Very nice, even though you said you don't intend to write any more clop I would love to see more from you!

The Machina, huh? Didn't know Luna was such a scrub.

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Mang, don't you talk smack about the Machina. That thing can take out a Heavy at half-charge.

Personally, I prefer the Hitman's Heatmaker, because activating that Focus just destroys in MvM, but hey, everyone has their favorites.

3391523 Eh, I just use the Default Sniper. Can't go wrong with it!

>Two gamer guys get in an argument over a match.
Of course, the MOST logical explanation for this would be that he was defending luna's honor and must be madly in love with her.

Because. Y'know, gamer guys don't get in ridiculous arguments over the authenticity of a match, ever. Right?

Right.

3395716
Well, he wasn't accusing Chaotic, he was accusing Luna. This is just a bit different.

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Still, defense of a friend is just, well, defense of a friend. No need to overthink it.

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I stretched it a bit here, but no harm no foul, right?

Ello. Was just reading this again.:twilightsheepish:

Luna stood a few paces away, in the center of the room. Her hair wasn't in its usual ethereal form, instead a light blue that cascaded down around her head. Her eyes were half-lidded and her face held a faint blush. She still wore her royal regalia, save for her metal slippers.

A light blue what? Mane?:rainbowwild:

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I think you read that wrong. "Light blue" was referring back to when I said "hair" earlier in the sentence.

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Yeah, but still. It sounds weird when you read it out loud.

sweet and sexy, loved it

3395716
Yo coming back to read the clop again.

And lemme just say three words about that second-to-last sentence of yours.

League of Legends.

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Is this the only story of mine that you've ever read?

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Oh you already know the answer.:ajsmug:

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Duuuuuude. You're killing me.

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haha. am i a murderer now?

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