Rainbow Dash is missing in action, right after Pinkie Pie debuts a new line of pastries. Coincidence? (Yes.) Armed with a half-read copy of Sweeneigh Todd, the Cutie Mark Crusaders are out to uncover the grim truth!
Or, more likely, embarrass themselves.
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haha, I liked that. Funny!
Nice. I like the accuracy to the characters, and I think Twist would make an excellent apprentice for Pinkie.
Good job, I Say!
Good job, man! That was a great one-shot. Keep on writing like this because you write almost exactly like how the characters talk. I only noticed like one or two spelling mistakes so, yet again, good job.
530341 And now I wish I'd written only about Twist and Pinkie! (Hmmm...)
530365 530298 Thanks!
530400
Well, you could always write a sequel...
After all, this makes a good intro to a bigger series.
that was awesome!
That was adorable and funny at the same time, and I do question Twilight's sanity by giving grade school children such a dark and morbid book.
530441 ahh, kids love hideous gory violence, right Applebloom?
Oh
When I saw that title and description, I was horrified. When I finished the story, I was rather pleased.
Lol the whole thing was Twilight's fault, obivously she still has much to learn.
Pinkie Pie: Mistress of the art of "smile and nod".
Snarky Twilight is best Twilight.
I love how you identified Pinkie as "The walking explosion"
530754 And no other pony snarks it down like her
530768 international treaty forbids Equestria from splitting the Pinkie
Very nice!
Very accurate representation of the CMCs. I laughed at the part when they were "watching" Derpy. And were those Codenames?
And who doesn't love Prankster Sparkle? 
I hate Cupcakes to all bloody hell but this seemed like an interesting Twist on the subject.
Well done Twilight. You have truly studied at the hooves of the master.
530879 "this seemed like an interesting Twist on the subject"
I thee what you did there
this is hilarious! i lovelovelove your writing and the story. you really captured the characters well
i hate Cupcakes
i mean i like cupcakes but not Cupcakes
but i do like when broines make something good out of something horrorible 
530341
Not if Bon-Bon gets to her first!
"The Crusaders screamed like a turkey that had just found out where all its friends went on Christmas."
Laughed SO HARD at this...
531506 Yeah, Pinkie got to the turkeys too!
great story!
Not bad. Your style needs a bit more flow but you've got good jokes. Write more and you'll probably get pretty popular.
"Dear Princess Celestia. Today I learned that there are in fact no such things as murderers who dispose of their victims' bodies by turning them into pastries and selling them in Equestria..."
"Hmmm...Luna? Do you think we should introduce these fillies to the special wing of the royal kitchen sometime?"
534524 Or "Shady Rest Retirement Home", as it's officially called...
dude this could totally be the premise for an actual episode sometime!
Reminded me of this:
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Yea this sounds like something the CMC would do. Loved the jokes but agree with gryffinp, your flow could use some work. Not really anything I can point out specifically but reading the story it kind of felt like it was just jumping from moment to moment, no real sense of movement just random hoppity hop.
'Awww! That'th tho prethuth!!'
Ahhh, Twist... :)
640877 Twist is best filly!
531487
giggle at the grossies?
641753
I like Scootaloo just a teeny bit more. Twist is still awesome, though!
Twist is definitely far too underrepresented.
3609027 She hasn't had a speaking part since that one episode in S2. THIS SADDENS ME!!!
This made my day
The ending killed me.
It's a rare day indeed when someone can do something actually novel with the desiccated corpse that is Cupcakes,