• Member Since 17th Mar, 2014
  • offline last seen Oct 10th, 2023

ThePinkDerpFace


I like Ditzy.

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Ashie is a selfless colt who deals with his friends, school and bullies. But that would just be boring. So with the add twist a filly without a home wandering into his life how she effect his life?


First story so feel free to leave constructive criticism, poke holes in my story, and help find small errors cause this was create 99.99999% on mobile devices.

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I think you sould do a triple chack on spelling, just in case.

Well i think it is not bad. Maybe there is really something with the spelling but nothing what i really donĀ“t like.
I happy with it :ajsmug:

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