Kyle, an alien hitch hiker, who has a horribly overused name. Whats a common day for a guy like him?
A common day for a hitch hiker; wake up, find a ride, land on a planet, find a place that sells alcohol, get drunk, make new friends, get into trouble with new friends. Rinse, wash, repeat.
It was just another day in the life. Then, all the sudden, a fight with some creeps in costumes and boom, a voice in his head, his pajamas, bathrobe, and towel. And to make things even better, he was on an uncharted planet! Now he has to deal with the local-yokels while he waits for a pick up from yet another stranger so he can go back to his routine.
Stuff happens to say the least.
Chapters (1)
Keep writing. The guide needs a chapter on this planet.
All my yes. All of it!!
In all seriousness, this is pretty good for a test!
4241090 Thanks, honestly my other story takes precedence over this, but I hope to bring you more soon!
4241136 Thank you! I will take all of your yes and use it to feed my creative flow (the hobo in my basement), so that I can bring you more of this!
4241193 I shall proceed soon hopefully, but like I said, it was test, and is not my main current focus. I hope to satisfy you with more soon.
To all of you; what was your favorite bit of the first chapter?
Thanks again for the positive feedback people, it really does make a difference.
~AnimatedGamer
4243184 This has a lot of potential--I'm a BIG hitchhikers fan, but I think you should drop the narrator-Kyle interplay. It seems to have taken off as a fad of its own and lost its narrative potential.
I first saw it in Drowtales, then several people began writing about it in stories, and I think I heard someone say that it was being used in one of those highschool-girl cartoon shows.
If you can do something more with it then follow that path, but I came off feeling that it distracted from the rest of the story. Still got an up-vote from me though.