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Heart of Shadows

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TheDeinonychus

TheDeinonychus #1 · Mar 30th, 2012 · · · Part 1 ·

Ok, so I finaly did it. I posted a fanfic. I know it's probably full of spelling and grammar mistakes. I dont have an editor so just, be gentle

Peppy Greyskull

Peppy Greyskull #2 · Apr 2nd, 2012 · · · Part 1 ·

384962 Not bad, not bad. If it wasn't for you telling me what its basis was about, I wouldn't know what to think of it though. It may have started off a little bit strong, but it's still good. Think we'd need a bit more to it though.

TheDeinonychus

TheDeinonychus #3 · Apr 2nd, 2012 · · · Part 1 ·

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Well it is a pretty grim tragedy. That and I tend to not hold back. Probably one of my shortcommings, but eh, hopefuly I can make it work. I've started on part two, but had to stop part way into it. Just gotta get back on the horse. Or pony. Wait, that sounds dirty