Ella loved My Little Pony.
One fateful day, the owner of one the biggest companies on Earth, Winter Industries, asked her if she wanted to go to Equestria.
There was no way she was going to pass this up.
Note: This story contains OCs that were at one point primary but have since become background OCs, so this is the only time certain characters will have leading roles (Eg. GARVIS, Andrea, etc.) Also, certain places are only featured here (Eg. Sanctuary). I wrote this awhile back, you can probably tell by comparison to my newer stories, but this is the first one I completed.
This is also the intro story for my OC, Princess Ella.
Based off Spritelight by Makitk
Chapters (15)
Sounds interesting, I'll have to read it later. I'll still give you a fav and a follow though. And a smiley face too.
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Hope you like it!
This is actually the first story I ever wrote to completion.
4199705 I have read the first seven chapters so far. This story is so awesome.
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I know! I wrote it!
Not to be a spoiler, but there will, as always with my stories, be a happy ending.
4200044 YAY, HAPPY ENDING!!!!
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HAPPY ENDING OR BUST!
That's what I say!
4203836 LOL!!!!!!!!!!!
4203836 I don't get why this story has more thumbs down then up. This story is awesome.
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Would you believe this is actually the first story I ever wrote to completion, not the ones I posted prior to this?
(Because honestly, it is)
4206651 well I've never read your other story's.
4206651 your story has been accepted in Incredible Stories and only the most incredible stories are aloud in there.
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It's a ripoff using elements from my story Spritelight. I can't imagine it being "incredible".
I told this guy when he asked me if he could use my story that I would rather he didn't. But he clearly persisted. Some parts of the story are direct copies from my story. I'm more than a little ticked off by this.
This story is NOT endorsed by me in ANY way and is a blatant ripoff that should have no place on this site.
4343662 I'm so sorry, I swear I didn't know.
Due to the fact that this story is almost a complete ripoff of someone else's story, this story as been deleted from Incredible Stories. Sorry.
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In my defence, I never read Spritelight Part 2.
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Also, I think you may be under the catergory of 'bully.'
If you an't say something nice, keep it to yourself.
And I did not copy and paste anything.
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Sorry. I had not realized that the major part of the story was similar to Sprightlight. I haven't read part 2, so I have no idea the extent. I will work on something worthy of Incredible Stories, and will take any suggestions, as my mind has been at a blank since my computer broke last week. I'm using another one until I get mine back next week (hopefully).
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I will consider taking this down. But I cannot until I get my computer back. It broke last Sunday, and the hard drive is unuseable, but this story is one of the ones I'm angriest at myself for loosing.
I will not debate this, as I am upset at the wording in your comment, and would not like to see any more of it here.
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I can provide screenshots of both of our stories side-by-side with the relevant passages marked.
I told you when you first asked that I did not like the idea of you copying my story's scenes and simply inputting your characters. While the overall story leads to a different conclusion than mine, there are more than a few scenes which are direct copies or have had small changes in their sentences while remaining recognizable as being copied.
You may call me a bully if you wish, but the fact remains you continued to write this story even while knowing I objected.
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I tried my best to change it, and writ every word in it. I must go now.
This is unconventional, I guess.
I don't know if I like it though... .
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Well, it was my first story, like, EVER. So, it probably is a bit crumby.
I counted nine different movie and game references in 1 chapter, I think that's a record.
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Name them.
4735104 Ok is that a challenge? For I accept.
1. Sanctuary?
2. Berk, How to Train your Dragon
3. Eggmanland from Sonic
4. Pyrriah, Wings of Fire
5. Soleanna?
6. Renamon, Digimon
7. Forerunner artifact, Halo
8. Fire Nation Palace, Avatar the last Airbender
9. GARVIS, Iron Man
If I got any wrong please tell me.
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All except Sanctuary, as I tend to use that name for places.....a lot.
4737706 Oh ok so just 8 references.