The Gate

Ok so the ponies dug up a strange artifact, well for theme it is, for a certain few humans on earth it is simply known as the STARGATE. And SG1 will come and meet our favorite ponies.

I don't own Stargate Sg1 nor MLP:FIM

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Iroh Legoman

Iroh Legoman #1 · Jun 18th, 2014 · · · The artifact ·

Iroh Legoman

Iroh Legoman #2 · Jun 18th, 2014 · · · First Contact ·

BioniclesaurKing4t2

BioniclesaurKing4t2 #3 · Jun 19th, 2014 · 2 · · First Contact ·

An interesting idea, but I must say that the spelling, grammar, and formatting leave something to be desired (probably contributing to the abundance of dislikes). A quick review of FimFiction's Writing Guide should help with some of the clarity issues. For instance: new speaker, new paragraph. Just work on proofreading and keep up the storytelling; there aren't nearly as many Stargate crossovers out there as there deserve to be.

spider-pony32

spider-pony32 #4 · Oct 29th, 2014 · · · First Contact ·

Keep up the good work thanks.

Autobot Robrony

Autobot Robrony #5 · Mar 30th, 2015 · · · First Contact ·

I always like seeing another Stargate fic. SG-1 and Atlantis are my favorite series, but yeah this fic is a mess when it comes to grammar structure, and spelling, I recommend looking through it or have someone help out with the polishing. Not to mention it might for you to take a look at the Stargate Wiki for additional info. For example the MALP is an acronym for Mobile Analytic Laboratory Probe and thus all letters must be capitalized. As for SG-1's Jaffa teammate it is spelled Teal'c NOT T'alc.

I will not down vote it because of such bad format, but I will not up vote it due to it. I will give it a watch, but nothing more until it's fixed

SeventhBrony