A very short story that details the final days of a pony who always put her friend before herself. Remember your loved ones for the deeds they did in life, and not for their death.
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Aw...
A tearjerker, but a wonderfully wrote tearjerker at that. Short but sweet.
The ever-existing grip of death claims all those unsuspecting and all those good.
Beautiful story! Quite sad though D:
Aww now I'm depressed.
I didn't cry at first... But then after it was over I did. I can't explain it.
Thank you guys so much. It's good to know that people are liking this as much as I did. I actually cried after writing this, if you'll believe it. Feedback means a lot to me, and seeing all this inspires me to keep writing. The next one I'm writing will be relatively dark, as I'm experimenting with genres to see what I like doing. Check out my account if you want to keep up to date, as I will be posting shorts fairly regularly. Again, thank you.
just goes to show how much of a bitch life can be
this didnt make me cry, but it saddened me
I clicked this because it has the same name as a poem written by Lord Alfred Tennyson, someone am related to
bravo good sir bravo
Wow. Congratulations. I don't even like Pinkie all that much, and this still managed to be touching and sad (though admittedly a little on the sudden side).
Uh, you might want to change the description. You wrote "put herself before her friends", instead of the reverse.
It was very short and the story passed way to fast, but in the end, it still made me shed a tear.
Good one c:
Hell... That's a lot of sad. Brilliant Fic. I just wish it wasn't so damn sad :P
I... Don't know. I'm a sucker for sad fics, and often find them to be the fics that really make me reflect. Make me change into something better. This just... Didn't do it. I don't know. I didn't cry. I didn't... Feel... as if i had read a sad fic. Perhaps that's it though. The story was written well, there were no mistakes that upset the flow of reading. It went by a bit fast but that was hardly something to complain about. It just didn't feel all that sad. But maybe I'm doing what pinkie wanted. Not remembering her for an untimely (albeit ficticious) death, but what she did for everypony. What she did for me. Looking back at what she did... It made me.... As Pinkie would say.... Smile Smile Smile.
Pinkie cannot die.
Its like life is a game, and she has spammed the thirty-life code.
So sad and written so beautifully.
While it may have been short, I really enjoyed this one while it lasted. Nice work.
I cried at the balloon part.
Classic, sad, short.
Its okay.