• Member Since 14th Mar, 2012
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Well, I took the legend of Zelda and made an mlp parody of it. This is my first fic, so tell me where it could use some work (spelling error, punctuation errors, needs more detail, etc.) kay?

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Rushed.

Too rushed.

There Is Such a Thing as Too many Referances.
Even though this is a Crossover, You Might Give the Forest or GDT a new name.
Great story though.

This is very good.
Navi is a bit ruder than usual.
But still very good.
What will you do about Epona?

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He's gonna make a Human version of Epona of course :pinkiehappy:

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That's a very strange graphic.

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Sorry bout the pic, I didn't even think while writing that so I had no problem NOT imagining XD

376658 lol indeed. replace link with Lyra, boom. instant crossover classic.

376658 ok for reals im actually onto something and am making a prologue right bucking now. btw i failed to find my own copy of Lyra Link in my folder with 3000 pony pics so i used the one u posted.

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I don't mind, I actually posted the image just to see if the author if this story wanted to use it for his cover image, But it giving you a spark of inspiration is also nice. looking forward to your creation :twilightsmile:

Deku tree, Y U TALK SO MODERN :rainbowhuh:

got this same idea at 4am, but you beat me to it. I like it and hope to see more.

Isn't there like four other Zelda related stories on this website, I'd hate to say this, but most of the other Zelda stories that relate to Ocarina of Time are better than this story. It's too rushed and there is no back-story or at least a little slice of life with the other Kokiri characters. (That's if you name them Kokiri instead of something else.)

377406 I didn't know that, i was playing this game 4 the 3ds, and i wanted to make a pony version of it.

377217 I ain't real good @ makin old style talkin:twilightsheepish:

376455 it took me a week to get what little i have now

Good job, can't wait 4 more!

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With great nostalgic video games such as Doom, Mario Bros., Zelda, Pac-Man and all sorts of Arcade and 80's and 90's classics.

People have VERY HIGH expectations when it comes to making a cross-over of peoples favourite child-hood videogames, and most people expect the writer to pull it off perfectly while making the story. All I can really say is that you should take your time in writing the upcoming chapters and try to jot down or note any new ideas that you have for the series. If you rush the story and make it look like rubbish then people will easily point out the mistakes and flood your inbox, yadda, yadda, yadda.

Good luck.

378367 Thanks... i'll remember that 4 the next chapter and so on.

376658 that pic fits perfectly for skyward sword

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