• Member Since 14th Mar, 2012
  • offline last seen Apr 8th, 2012

TheEasterNacho


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Well... I have heard so much about the story cupcakes, so i decided to go online and read it, and by the time i was done, i was both disgusted and amazed. I thought 'What if Pinkie got me?' so that is how this fan-fiction came to be. Well, I hope you enjoy!!!

P.S. This is my first fic, so tell me where it could use some work, but go easy kay?
~Nacho

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 39 )

Good so far! I can't wait to see what happens! I would suggest to add a few flaws to Nacho so he seems believable, and there are some GPS (grammar, punctuation, spelling) errors you should fix, but everything else is well done!

374337 Thank You! I realy appreciate feedback!

I don't understand why there's so many thumbs down and not one vote up yet...
Well, now there is.
Keep it up!

NOO PINKIE PLESE NO DONT KILL HIM :raritydespair: :raritycry:

374409 I am a girl... so is Nacho...

374418 Wow didnt know there was girls on FIMFiction :rainbowhuh: whatever :rainbowlaugh:

374384

Because it is a cupcakes clone... there only needs to be one not 100 goddamn thousand

374459 Not a clone, just a sequel with my own o.c. :ajbemused:

374465 omfg!!!!1!!11111! this has not been done before!!!1111111111! U SO ORIGINUAL!11!1111!!

Good job, but i DID see a few errors... Hope pinkie don't get Nacho... can't wait 4 more... tracking & liking :pinkiecrazy:

Does Nacho taste like nachos?

and favoriting

frankly,cupcakes has long since been done to death :P

otherwise it can also be confusing at some points as to which charecter is saying what

374763 Yesh... I know... VIOLENCE ISH COMING!!!!!

Don't pay attention when people bash your ideas because they're "done to death" If you think about it, most episodes of MLP are "done to death", and we all know how great those turned out. If you use an idea that was used before, it doesn't mean it's unoriginal. It means you have the courage to try something out. Keep up the good work, and try to find encouragement in haters. :twilightsmile:

Loved it. Can't wait what happens next! :pinkiecrazy:

374918 I appreciate it! :pinkiehappy: 374683 i bet pinkie is wondering that to. :pinkiecrazy:

Ah...
This is starting to get bad. I'm not smiling enough these days...
Or getting enough sleep...
Hopefully you don't mind when I say I'm going to stop tracking this story now. :derpytongue2:

epicnessssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:derpytongue2::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::pinkiesick:

Fuuuck, i hate you pinkamina :fluttershyouch:

Someone needs to send the Punisher into Equestria.

I like this so far. your a good writer! looking forward to more fics by you. :rainbowkiss: P.S. NEVER TRUST PINKIE PIE :pinkiecrazy:

Like i said, cant trust pinkie pie. Make chapter 3 soon plz! :raritystarry:

Y U NO FINISH?

388595 I hate you :ajbemused: No but seriously, don't be hating on pinkie.

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